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Guest chapter 1 . 12/18/2018 Bio: Clan cat. Warrior. Frostbranch’s mate, Juniperkit and Owlkit’s mother Name: Streamlight Gender: Female Age: 2 years (24 moons) Appearance: light misty bluish-gray she-cat with dark blue eyes Personality: Shy and soft-spoken; doesn’t really like fighting |
SunStream chapter 1 . 1/18/2015 Name: SunStream Family: BirdSong-Mother RavenFeather-Father RavenClaw-Brother PineTail-Brother IceWing-Sister CherryFrost- Sister Appearance: Golden-orange she cat with swirled amber stripes, fluffy amber tail, and sparkling blue-green eyes. Age: I don't care, just PLEASE don't make her old in her first appearance if you even look at this review! Don't make her die... Personality: Clumsy, cheerful, stubborn, and patient |
Aise chapter 1 . 1/18/2015 Bio - Clan cat. Deputy, if position is open. Softcloud's mate. Nightkit, Ashkit, and Featherkit's father. Name - Scorchflight Gender - Male Age - 3 years (36 moons) Appearance - Dark gray tabby tom with blue eyes Personality - Loyal and dedicated Bio - Clan cat. Queen. Scorchflight's mate. Has three kits, Nightkit, Ashkit, and Featherkit. Name - Softcloud Gender - Female Age - 2 years (24 moons) Appearance - Fluffy white she-cat with green eyes Personality - Affectionate and caring Bio - Clan cat. Softcloud and Scorchflight's son. Ashkit and Featherkit's brother. Name - Nightkit Warrior Name - Nightleap Gender - Male Age - 5 moons Appearance - Dark gray, almost black, tabby tom with barely visible markings and blue eyes Personality - Brave and curious Bio - Same to Nightkit's. Name - Ashkit Medicine Cat Name - Ashwing Gender - Male Age - 5 moons Appearance - White and gray tom with green eyes Personality - Snarky and aloof Other - Wishes to become a medicine cat Bio - Same to her brothers'. Name - Featherkit Warrior Name - Featherfall Gender - Female Age - 5 moons Appearance - Fluffy light-gray tabby she-cat with blue eyes Personality - Gentle and responsible Bio - Rogue-born. Name - Ambertail Gender - Female Age - 4 years (48 moons) Appearance - Tortoiseshell she-cat with amber eyes Personality - Cold and aggressive Other - Unrelated to the family above |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/17/2015 Hazelstar, a she-cat who is 43 moons old with light brown tabby fur a white muzzle pwus bwue ies. Intelajent, karing, swift, loial. I love worrers katz. Do nut insolt my spelleen, you freaking bitch. I curse your stinking penus and crazy ass. I kick your butthole. |
ScarpathTheWarrior chapter 1 . 1/18/2015 Bio: Leader of ThunderClan, mother is Frostleaf (white with green eyes), father is Groundfur(brown with brown eyes), sister is Poolpetal (white with golden brown patches), mate is Hopstorm (gray and black with long legs) Name: Vixenstar (the cats do know what a vixen is) Gender: Shecat Age: 36 moons Appearance: mottled, dark ginger fur with much darker paws, face, and ears. Brilliant blue eyes. Personality: Sly, cunning, but fair and firm. A well respected cat. Bio: Apprentice, later warrior, of ShadowClan. Mother is Fallowleaf (light brown tabby), father is Whitereed (golden brown tabby with white patches), brothers are Brindlepaw (later Brindlestorm, mottled brown tabby) and Foxpaw (later Foxtooth, golden brown with darker muzzle). Name: Ripplepaw (later Ripplewing) Gender: Shecat Age: 7 moons Appearance: black and gold tortoiseshell with amber-gold eyes. Personality: Kind, helpful, caring, but defensive, stubborn, and hesitant. Thanks! :D |
Thetrueking56789 chapter 1 . 1/18/2015 Bio: Rogue but when his home was destroyed by Two-legs, he joined Thunderclan Name: DarkFrost Gender: Tom Age: 24 moons old Appearance: Icy white tom with a gray tail and black eyes Personality: He's funny and kind to everyone, even to other clans. He can hold a grudge however, but will forgive them. He sometimes agree's about fighting other clans if they wronged his clan or family somehow. Other: Wants a mate and kits |
Silversky161 chapter 1 . 1/18/2015 Name: Flamingsky Gender: female Age: 24 moons Appearance: Black tom with ginger flecks has (full) ginger paws,ears,and underbelly has amber eyes Personality: energetic,funny,playful,kind-hearted,creative,and like an average cat (not really smart) |
Hailstrike chapter 1 . 1/18/2015 Bio:Clanborn,Warrior Name:Moonmist Gender:Shecat Age:24 moons Appearance:Beautiful gray and white shecat with glossy fur and icy blue eyes Personality:Sarcastic,witty,snarky,fiesty,proud,fierce,loyal,always says what she thinks,even when she losses her temper she can tell when she needs to calm down and when she needs to back down and is not afraid to admit she made a mistake when it comes to her mate and kits she is a totally different cat Mate:Stormfang Kits:Streampaw,Vinepaw,Dewpaw,and Fogpaw Other:She has a bite to match her bark she is one of the best fighters in her clan so is her mate Bio:Clanborn,Warrior Age:29 moons Name:Stormfang Gender:Tom Appearance:Big,handsome,powerful,muscular,dark blue tom with grey eyes and scar over left eye Personality:Brave,loyal,snarky,fierce,not afraid to challenge others when he is challenged and will get right up in their face,proud,but he is a big softie when it comes to his mate and kits Kits:Streampaw,Vinepaw,Dewpaw,and Fogpaw Other:One of the clans best fighters Name:Streampaw/heart Gender:Shecat Age:6 moons old Appearance:Pretty Icy blue shecat with dark blue eyes Personality:Energetic,stubborn,brave,witty,bubbly,and curious Name:Vinepaw/tail Other:Can he be the medicine cat apprentice Gender:Tom Age:6 moons old Appearance:handsone big muscular dark ginger Tom with grey eyes Personality:Brave,determined,bold,wise,confident and nice Name:Dewpaw/mist Gender:Tom Age:6 moons old Appearance:Beautiful blue and white shecat with icy blue eyes Personality:Sweet,curious,energetic,and peppy Name:Fogpaw/dust Age:6 moons old Appearance:Big muscular,powerful,handsome grey/white/silver Tom with silver-gold eyes Personality:Sarcastic,snarky,proud,determined,kind,brave,loyal Future Mate:Jaykit/paw/song Name:Jaykit/paw/song Age:4 moons Gender:Shecat Appearance:Jay blue/black/midnight blue shecat with blue-green eyes Personality:Sweet,gentle,energetic,and determined Mom:Softwing Dad:Lionlight Name:Softwing Gender:Shecat Age:29 moons Appearance:Black shecat with clear blue eyes Personality:Sweet,gentle,calm,and energetic Name:Lionlight Age:33 moons Gender:Tom Appearance:Golden Tom with light golden eyes Personality:kind,loyal,sweet,and calm |
sentient pig cat chapter 1 . 1/18/2015 Bio: Born into her clan (whichever you choose), her brother Swallowkit died at a young age Name: Applestrike Gender: Female Age: 15 moons (young warrior) Appearance: Small she cat with speckled creamy brown fur and pale green eyes; has long sharp claws Personality: Quiet, calculating, formidable fighter, but also humorous, good tempered and imaginative Hope that's enough information! |
FallingStorm chapter 1 . 1/18/2015 Name: Streamtail Bio: clanborn, warrior Gender: girl Age: 16 moons Appearance: silver tabby with white paws and long, fluffy tail Personality: fast, independent Other: Family: mother:Greypelt- grey she cat, father:Barkstripe: brown tabby, sister: Birchfur- brown tabby with grey paws |
Embers to Ashes chapter 1 . 1/18/2015 Name: Embermist Gender: She-cat Age: 17 moons Appearance: Silver with ginger paws, striped tail and specks, green eyes. Personality: Loyal, brave, clumsy, chatty, good fighter. Other: Used to be loner as a kit |
Shy Sun that Hides Ghost chapter 1 . 1/18/2015 Wow, now that, is a lotta C:'s! Name: Bumblekit/Bumblebee Gender: Tom Age: 2 moons Appearance: Small gold and black tabby tom with baby blue eyes. Personality: Bright, funny, caring, loyal, brave. Other: Is way smaller than the other kits! Name: Redflame Gender: Tom Age: 39 moons Appearance: Red tabby tom with yellow eyes. Personality: Funny, brave, loyal, caring. Other: Father of Bumblekit, mate of Dawnstream. Name: Dawnstream Gender: She-cat Age: 38 moons Appearance: Blue she-cat with golden eyes and a dark silver underbelly. Personality: Loyal, caring, overprotective... Other: Mother of Bumblekit, only kit to survive birth, that is way she is overprotective... Name: Gorsetuft Gender: Tom Age: 38 moons Appearance: Muscular dark brown tom with green eyes. Personality: Gruff, loyal, fierce. Other: Apprentice is Bumblepaw. Name: Grassfrost Gender: She-cat Age: 38 moons Appearance: Silver she-cat with a black tail tip and green eyes. Personality: Fierce, cunning, sarcastic. Other: Sister of Gorsetuft & Dawnstream. Name: Hollypaw Gender: She-cat Age: 9 moons Appearance: Dark grey she-cat with amber eyes. Personality: Kind, caring, helpful, thoughtful, wise. Other: First cat to die out of story (like in clans or something/unless you've got plans)... Name: Quiet Locks Gender: Tom Age: 41 moons Appearance: Smoky black speckled silver tom with pale blue eyes. Personality: Demanding, thoughtful, cunning, determined. Other: Is an unknown dangerous rogue... Hope this helps, have fun with the story and feel free to PM me for anything! |
Tina-chan V chapter 1 . 1/17/2015 Name: Maplepaw (Maplebreeze) Gender: She-cat Age: 9 moons Appearance: Dark-brown tabby she-cat with blue eyes and white paws Personality: Friendly, encouraging, and a bit oblivious Bio: Maplepaw is the sister of Shiverpaw and daughter of Stormfall and Fawnspot. She is best at fighting, and average with hunting. She is Stormfall's favorite, but doesn't realize it. Xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Name: Shiverpaw (Shivercloud) Gender: She-cat Age: 9 moons Appearance: Small, brown she-cat with amber eyes Personality: Shy, easily startled, and apologetic, but she is a good friend Bio: Shiverpaw is the sister of Maplepaw and daughter of Stormfall and Fawnspot. She's not good at fighting, but is unknowingly a great strategic. She wishes to get more attention from her father. Shiverpaw has feelings for Smokepaw. Xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Name: Stormfall Gender: Tom Age: 42 moons Appearance: Gray tom with amber eyes Personality: Focused, stubborn, and impulsive Bio: Stormfall is the mate of Fawnspot and father of Maplepaw and Shiverpaw. He loves both his daughters equally, but shows favoritism for Maplepaw's skills unknowingly. Xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Name: Fawnspot Gender: She-cat Age: 45 moons Appearance: Brown-and-cream she-cat with green eyes Personality: Supportive, patient, and observant Bio: She is Stormfall's mate and the mother of Maplepaw and Shiverpaw. She actually was a medicine cat apprentice once, but changed to a warrior. She is currently Smokepaw's mentor. Xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Name: Smokepaw (Smokeheart) Gender: Tom Age: 10 moons Appearance: Black tom with a gray-tipped tail and blue eyes Personality: Strong-willed, determined, and protective of friends Bio: Smokepaw is a half-rogue cat, born outside the clans. His mother is Cinderfoot, a former rogue. His father is a now-deceased warrior named Troutsplash. He is determined to become a strong warrior. He was told by his mother that he gets his personality from his father. Smokepaw has feelings for Shiverpaw, and is very protective of her. Xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Name: Cinderfoot Gender: She-cat Age: 56 moons Appearance: Black she-cat with green eyes Personality: Clever, insightful, and eccentric Bio: She is the ex-mate of a dead warrior named Troutsplash, and mother of Smokepaw. Her name was previously just Cinder. She sees Troutsplash's personality in Smokepaw. According to her description, he was a silver tabby with blue eyes, and likely RiverClan. Xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx I don't know if your doing the official clans or not, but they are in the main one. Possible friends and all that. Have a pleasant day, my friend! :) |
YouBetterGarNot chapter 1 . 1/17/2015 BlueJay Female 12 moons Looks like a blue jay due to twolegs Calm,gentle,caring Secretly has wings (optional) |
Raven that flies at night chapter 1 . 1/17/2015 Silverwing: light grey tabby she cat with vividly blue eyes Gender: she cat age: 11 moons old Rank: new warrior Personality: funny outgoing Other: she has a brother named bluefeather Bluefeather: blue grey tom with piercing blue eyes gender: tom age: 11 moons old Rank: medicine cat Personality: grumpy and sarcastic Other: his sister is Silverwing They are in the main clan whether is is wind shadow thunder or river or any other |