Holy shit!
This isn't even fan fiction. Its a real book! If you changed the names of the characters you could sell this!
You are so fucking talented and I thourouly enjoy your writting.

I've read this story twice already and I'm going to read it again. I really love the story. and the way it was written tells me that you have lots of talent. it just suck me in. I love the way it made me feel, anger, hate , frustration but also love, humor and family love. And everytime Maya and Lucas seem to have their moment I get embarrassingly shy but that doesn't really stop me from reading, it just make want to know more,( well after I was done fangirling and screaming my head off). overall the story is fantastic, and it would be even more amazing if the was a sequel or at at least another story as good as this one.

Holy shit. I love your stories omfggg. Im still mad that Lucas AND Katy left her. Like wtf and like cmon she was pregnant. Im glad he came back but Katy that’s just no. ANYWAYS I LOVE THIS SM KEEP WRITING YOU HAVE A REAL TALENT. 3

I've never hated a character (or a real person either) as much as I do Jed... great job!

this is like a car accident

it's horrible but i can't look away

(just to clarify, your writing is not horrible, it's amazing i'm just talking about the gore and killing)

I finally found this story after looking for it's so long, you should put your stories on wattpad. Everyone would love them, when I finally found this story I could not stop reading it until I finished it, I freaking love it!

Can you please please please write maybe a mini sequel that includes Lucas meeting Abigail for the first time. It would make me so happy. This story was so good it's hard not to want more, I just want to have the moment when he sees Abigail and finally feels complete having the love of his life and his baby, or maybe he doesn't feel like that at first but he gradually begins to accept he's a father. Again you don't have to write a whole other story but a few more chapters would be so great. I love your work btw.

So Lucas was unintentionally being a hypocrite when he told Maya "don't start something you don't want to finish" or something like that lol

Whoa! Okay first things first. WHY DIDNT LUCAS GET TO SEE HIS CHILD! Okay now that I got that out of my system. You HAVE to make a sequel when Lucas sees Abbi for the first time and the Matthews see Lucas is back. Oh! And Lucas seeing Billy again! And also the WEDDING! I need to see Lucaya be married! It makes my heart melt when I think about it 3 BTW I did not expect Katy to go back to New York! (p.s. love your stories and creative ideas)

amazing I love it

Let me tell you that as soon as I started singing the song by Will Smith and Sisqo. To say the least, I'm excited.

NOOO I WANTED TO SEE LUCAS SEE HIS CHILD D; WHY (also great fanfic 10/10!

BRAVO! I LOVED IT! I read everything in a day. I couldn't stop reading. Nice ending. You are one of the best authors to exist.

WHEEEEEEWWWW-WEEEE! First of all, this story should be a freakin movie. I'm so serious, I actually felt like I was reading a script or something to a bomb-ass classic western movie. I'm so glad I gave this story a chance bc I saw it a few times but was like, eh, BUT ONCE AGAIN, YOU NEVER EVER DISAPPOINT! The action, the plot, the violence, the surprises, and the LUCAYA were all so perfect I screamed when I unfortunately reached the end. Time to go read another one of your stories!

I loved this story so much! Thank you so much for being inspired, no matter how weird that sounds.