I don't know what to say for this. It was obviously messed up, but the emotions were so raw... I think it was a great piece.

The ending made me sad.

Oh my fucking Christ this was beautiful. The idea that he created an unforgiving cycle of time loops where he indefinitely fucks Vegeta in every timeline. Just... Damn... This was great.

Aw Kid Trunks!

Aww poor Vegeta! :(

HOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

Well...now I get what you added "dark" in the description. Disturbing...wonderfully disturbing. X-)

Poor Vegeta. Mirai Trunks wtf is wrong with you? You've probably scare lil Trunks for life now. Hopefully this won't upset him too much but I have a feeling it will. I wouldn't return to this timeline again because you might end up getting your ass kicked by your other self. Update again soon

oh wow

I've been reading this type of stories for a very long time, and a well writen piece is a rare finding. Thanks for sharing and I do hope you continue with it.

awesome, thanks for writing this! OOOO: love seeing vegeta act so vulnerable. it was really cute when trunks was overjoyed to please his dad in the first chapter. vegeta getting raped and his reaction to it was great too, but i see trunks as pure-hearted, and have a hard time believing he would rape anyone. that's just my opinion tho lol.

Wow, so fascinating. Twisted, but fascinating. Somehow, I find it completely believable. Trunk's overwhelming desperation pushing him to do something that I think most fans would find impossible. I love it though. It's proof of just how painful the experience was of being completely ignored by the one who's approval was most needed.

This was beautifully dark and none of the less what he deserves for ignoring him constantly. Only a very rare few times have I ever felt sorry for the flame head but this isn't one of those times.
Anywho, great work and hope you update more of this :)

I love your writings XD

Hello!

Still surprised by Trunks's attitude. I guess he just wanted to replace Frieza in his father's dreams to create a more pleasurable memory but isn't he doing the same the tyrant did? Vegeta is traumatized by the idea of being powerless against his enemies so I'm definitely on his side this time. We already know how powerful he was after exiting the Hyperbolic Time Chamber so I hope he gets stronger, defeat his demons and put "the boy" in his damn place in the final chapter. Not in a sexual way, at this point I think we know Trunks wouldn't fall in that way. But he's more vulnerable than Vegeta in many ways (cough Gohan's death cough) and well, lucky, lucky future boy, you have a master of finding weak spots right there.

Hope you continue soon ;)

WTF Trunks that was wrong to do that to Vegeta. I know that he's an asshole but that doesn't mean you, like Frieza, can take away more of the only thing he has left and that's his pride. I just wonder if you'd like it if you were practically raped by someone who has your blood running through them? Just think about what Bulma would say if she knew what you had done to the man that she loves. I'm sure she would be very hurt and disappointed in you. Update again soon plzz