Reviews for Through the Looking Glass |
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Lamia of the Dark chapter 1 . 1/23/2015 This was really interesting to read, and I like the alternate dimension with happy sane Bellatrix who married the man she loves and has a normal life. And it's fitting that canon!Bella is jealous of her alternate self. I especially liked the line where she asked her if she'd been living under a rock. XD A few grammar things: "even the likes of you would now." - "now" should be "know". When a sentence is cut off suddenly, don't put a period after the dash. Is this a oneshot or will you be continuing it? I would be interested in reading further if you plan on writing more chapters. |