This was amazing! I love hlw you established the universe and the Doctor's character so clearly. And even when Rise was in trouble, she wasn't some damsel in distress, and the Doctor didn't talk down to her and try to keep her from helping because she'd get in the way. She was able and brilliant and dear gods but you wrote an amazing story. Loved Jack too.

Great fic! I'm so glad you decided to make this a whole lot longer than just a one shot :D a question tho, why did the Doctor say he didn't want to chance her going to the hospital? Was it because he didn't think he'd make it there in time before she died? If that's so he'd have to be extremely advanced to heal a delicate head injury and a concussion, as well as have acceptable equipment at his place. Just wondering! Great story :)

I loved this story!

Wonderful story!

A truly magnificent well written and entertaining story! Thank you for writing and sharing it! : )

This was so brilliant! I swear I loved every word of it :D thank you so much for writing this beautiful, amazing story!

Oh and my phone background is Nine, Jack and Rose so I was already in the mood for this update XD

Ah, bulletproof vest? Sometimes even those cant save you but it would have been a good idea :) sorry, I seemed to have missed the last two chapters before this so I had to catch up. Anyway, I like the direction you're going, not so much relationship drama as with Watch It Burn, not that i don't mind that sometimes but it still is refreshing :) update soon! :D

I'm so glad you updated this! I love this story and I can't wait to see how it ends!

Omg, You need to update soon! I'm really looking forward to see what happens with The Master! Oh, and I love the relationship you created between Rose and the Doctor :3 thank you so much for bringing us this story!
Take care.
Lyz.

A really great story, I love the way Rose, Jack and the Doctor interact! Keep up the good work, I am looking forward to more! : )

I really love this! I'm having trouble picturing Saxon, we didn't get much description. I hope you give us a little more in the next episode. Where's Micky? I noticed hrs not in here at all. I love the plotline but the characters are a bit oc ish.

I love this, your wording makes everything ten times more interesting, and it runs smoothly. Can't wait for more!

I'm so glad you updated this story! I absolutely love this story and I can't wait to see how it ends.

Awwww! Don't stop here! Something is going to go really bad. I just know it. It can't be all smooth sailing right? I'm just hoping that it wouldn't be another cliffhanger! But it would be good to have Rose really shine! Awesome chapter! Update soon!(: