I can't blame you for being unhappy with the way the manga turned and ended. It was not really a bad ending, but it was not entirely satisfying, and I agree that there was a lot of fanservice, especially regarding DanWill and that the ending feels... very rushed. Still, despite all of this, it will remain one of my favourite mangas. I can only hope that, despite your disappointment with the manga, you will continue to write in the fandom, even if rarely. I know how real life can keeps us busy

Thank you for sharing this final chapter with us. It has been a delight to follow this story (also because it's thanks to this fanfic we came to know each other), you offered your story an interesting ending (much more than the manga if I can say so), it was very captivating and how brave of you it was to kill William. At least, his soul is safe with Uriel and he returned it to the circle of rebirth, so not everything is lost! I loved the way it was Isaac who wrote about this, like a true story teller. Poor thing, everything must have been so overwhelming for him. It was touching when he said he would write about William.

Thank you again, for this wonderful story!

Poor William can't seem to catch his breath but Metatron's reveal scene to William was interesting to read! I think it was time for him to know what was happening between Metatron and Kevin/Uriel. Poor Kevin just got William back he's taken from him again, I wonder what will happen next! Raguel and Uriel's scene was interesting! I know I use that word quite a lot xD but I like Raguel as a character a lot, and it's always nice to see more of him, especially when we know how fond he is of Uriel, and how here he's ready to help him. I wonder if Uriel and Raguel will manage to trick Metatron. This one is a sly fox, and now Michael is back, I really wonder what will await the characters! Thanks for the update ;)

I am finally taking the time to read and comment your latest chapters! Sorry I was so late! It's a true delight to read your story again. Plus, this chapter is also about Kevin and William, and you know how much I love them ;) it was interesting to see William trying to... conciliate (trying to find the right word, and cannot) Kevin and Uriel, with Dantalion's words echooing inside his mind. It is true William doesn't know everything about Kevin, but I like to think what he knows about him is what matters the most. He knows the man who basically raised him since the death of his parents, and he knows Kevin can read him well. Also loved the part where William wanted to ask Kevin if he was alright but not managing to say the words, it's so a William thing to do! I also liked to see Mycroft, most writers (including myself haha) tend to forget he exists Thanks for the update!

I love kevin. But I really enjoy sitri and Kevin's jabs at each other. And poor danny he just trying to protect William and he doesn't understand! Another damsel would be flattered at his protection!

I think I like the interactions between Uriel and Sitri. They have a certain tension going on. I actually really want to know what will happen when they return to the human world. Haha, I'm so full of questions!

I read this chapter the day you posted it, yet I am only reviewing it now because I had to wait for me to be calm again, because if I had to give you a review back then, you would have seen incoherent words, such as "azqsdfghjklm my feels!" and I figured that, as an author, you would more appreciate a constructive review ;p

So. The chapter. I liked it. I liked it a lot. Mostly because of the ending, I will be honest with you on that one. Since we can't have a reunion between Kevin and William in the manga yet, I am contenting myself with their reunion in this chapter. I didn't expect them to meet again in this chapter, but I am NOT complaining because I've been waiting for this moment, and I am not at all disappointed. I loved the image of William running as soon as he head the word "angel" and jumping into Kevin's arms and Kevin hugging him, it was so... aaah, the words are not enough to describe the feelings this moment gives me. I loved the moment where Dantalion is not quite sure what he is doing and basically thinks everyone here is mad (including himself) and letting William go.

The first part of the chapter was also nice! It was interesting to see Kevin and Sitri interact, and Kevin having to trust Sitri with the truth... and Sitri being surprised at the revelations Kevin told him. Those weeks between the two of them must have been... interesting xD

Haa Dantalion, you big meanie, let William out so he can be at Kevin's side D: He's so worried for Kevin, after all he doesn't know if he's okay. Dantalion is so focused on the attacks and his vision of "how to protect William" he's not aware his protection isn't wanted. Well, at least I'm glad Kevin isn't alone and that there's Sitri to watch over him. It would be another thing if it was someone like Metatron or Michael xD Speaking of which, it seems we will see Michael again and he's NOT happy (understatement of the centuty!)

I don't know if it will help. I noticed you were having some color problems for Gabriel's clothes on tumblr, but because you don't have Anon. enabled there I thought I'd mention it here instead.

According to Wikipedia Gabriel either wears blue or white garments. He also carries a Lily, a trumpet, a branch of paradise, a scroll, a lantern, and a scepter.

However, since we are talking about a Gabrielle/Gabriella whom I consider to be a different entity to Gabriel. I'd say either baby or cornflower blue. If it was white I'd say either floral or cream white. Maybe even honeysuckle or seashell. Soft colors.

I hope that helps you out on your drawing.

Always grateful for a new chapter. I really loved the ending.

Well, Sitri has got himself into a "fine" situation with him illegally hiding an angel, his uncle knowing about William, Dantalion keeping William... It sure not is easy being Sitri! I mist say I didn't expect Dantalion, but at the same time it's been 18 chapters so I shouldn't be surprised Dantalion "finally" made an appareance. Though he sure can be annoying sometimes, but that's Dantalion for you! He's a stubborn demon but I can get why: he hasn't seen William in ages, he doesn't know what happened since the last time he saw William, he has troubles understanding what's going on and mostly he has troubles understanding why is Uriel/Kevin so important to William (it's understanding that he doesn't trust Kevin but I say: he deserved that slap :p)

William breaking down was really a moving scene, I wanted to cry with him!

The scene with Isaac and Sean/Metatron was... interesting xD

It's getting pretty dramatic! I think Dantalion adds a bit of a lively flare, doesn't he? (No pun intended!) I think this story is really exciting because I can't tell if it's nearing the end or the middle. Hmm... will Metatron go to Hell? That would be exciting.

Oh my God, this chapter...

I am in an emotional mess right now, I hope you're happy about it (or maybe you are not... or maybe you are! Most fanfiction authors just LOVE to make their reader cry or to drown them in feels!), I feel like I was in the same state as William. I was worried for Sitri but mostly Kevin, I feared for them and it hurt to see Sitri, Kevin and William like that, it almost broke my heart T_T Right now, I want to be in denial, just like William and hope Kevin will be alright. It's hard to see William in this state, but it's normal for him to react like that. If I was him, I wouldn't be better. And aaaaaah the ending of the chapter! Now, I'm also worried for Sitri. Baalberith wanting to speak to him rarely means good news.

I am so delighted to see you posted the next part (Impatient as I am, I want to shout “More, more, more!”, but of course I realize you have a life outside writing as well ) and this chapter was... wow... just... wow! It was very intense, my heart was beating fast because I was dreading Metatron's next words and actions. You wrote the tension between him and Uriel's conversation very well! Metatron, you sly little fox! How deliciously evil you are! I was surprised he didn't mention William at first but eventually he did. He sure know where to strike! Poor Uriel! Sitri came at the right (or maybe the wrong) moment. I wonder what will happen now that the angels are aware of his presence! Thanks for this chapter :)

I was at the edge of my seat with this chapter. I loved how you captured the tension with Uriel and Metatron's conversation, how deliciously evil Metatron is, and Sitri... ah, I can't wait for more. I guess it's pretty easy to tell how I excited I am about this story. I hope you'll continue soon.

Wow, another chapter this quick! It's Christmas :D it was good to see Uriel again, I was wondering about him. This chapter was enjoyable, I could feel the tension slowly building, now I am both looking forward and dreading Uriel and Metatron's meeting. Metatron is so unpredictable, I can't guess his next move! I can only hope it won't be too awful for Uriel and that William will stay safe in Hell... well, only the next chapters will tell