Great story!

yes love this anime this was cool I can just the fire in Yona's eyes. Love it!

I think this would be an excellent ending for the series. Thank you

nice :)

That was a pretty dark moment between sowon and yona but I guess it's a plausible ending since he did commit a treacherous crime against royalty. Either way, nice story. Good luckies with your future stories.

Ohh this was very nice! I loved the badassery and how Yona would take none of their shit with "who is king" etc :D
I think/hope the actual end of the series would be similar to this, especially the part with the hair pin was very endearing imo. If I'm honest though, the way it's written I don't think Soo-Won is just written to be plain evil. I think there might be a dramatic scene and Soo-Won will most possibly die but I don't think it'll be by Yonas or Hak's hand, as it would just be another kill to get to the throne. I dunno, but I like this version very much too, it's very satisfying as I could never really fathom to like Soo-Won that much.
I also liked how the dragons had their part but it wasn't actually that big and that it was really Yonas fight for as little as they appeared here they were very in character though so yay for you :)
Keep up the good work
~Kat

Yesssss Badass Yona is my fav, thank for this awesome short fic! Also that bonus seen was gold! Lmao Yoon you poor boy.

While this is an interesting read, I still believed that Su-won and Yona still cared for each other even if the latter is torn by her love and hostility. However this could be interpreted as what could happen

Feels kind of out of place :/
Feels very un-Yona like. But time does change a person and in the manga, it can be presumed that she doesn't resent Soo-Won that much as she had seen his vision to change Kouka into a stronger kingdom. He, in his own way did it for the sake of the country and she can't hate someone who is helping her people.
Soo-Won and Yona, never wished for each other's death, even if it was a necessity. It's my own personal opinion but, I have never envisioned Yona to rule. She is more of a Shadow King than anything else. She does realize that her father, as a king was pretty... useless, even if he wished for peace.
There's a difference between wanting peace and doing nothing for the sake of it afterall. Relenting is not a long-term viable solution.

I'm so happy a this story exists! I was also imagining Yona using the hairpin to stab Suwon but I not in a way that she would kill him.

Most characters are OC though and it seemed like you still don't know who the Green and Yellow dragon is but nevertheless, it's a good story. The Bonus scene was funny :)

hahahahaha XDD omg i can somehow see this happening so much in the anime XDD

I agree with Editor2, it would be absolutly awesome and I also liked the way the whole relationship worked out... ok fine, i hope the manga won't take quite as long to bring them together. The way it looks it won't, she is already starting to realizer her feelings. But still the bonus scene was hilarious and I think aboslutly possible! xD

I'm imagining Yun and Yona as a couple and can't stop laughing

1. The bonus was very funny!
2. Where is Ao?
2. Yun should have said 'Pretty boy genius'

Powerful fight scene. I'm fairly sure Soo won was manipulated into his revenge and he has a lot of lingering affection for Yona and Hak. Mind you, he'll still kill them. He's somewhat single minded about his plan, but he loves them. Yona killing him would be a difficult thing for her, character wise. She also has lingering affection for him, mixed in with all the hurt and anger. I could see her fight him and win, but not kill him. Maybe that's just me. Still, loved the use of the hairpin there.