. God.! LOVE LOVE LOVE! What a great story. I loved ever bit of it, couldn’t stop reading until the end. Looking forward to reading more of your stories.

I really like this story so far, however, there is something unpleasant that I would like to point out; it's about the presents brought for Levy. I know you said in the story that she got two versions of the same thing but, this is exactly what bothers me. How can they bring something similar to the other every single time? It's as if they have talked to eachother beforehand about what to give her as a present (which I highly doubt would ever happen), fact that makes the story feel unnatural. And also, how did she get the presents from Gajeel? I get that Ian brought them personally but, I haven't read anything about the way Gajeel gave them to her...and I can't really think that he came inside the building and just droped the gifts on the table in front of her, without even saying anything or without her reacting seeing him. Maybe he just gave them to Jet and/or Droy to give her...I guess it will be up to my imagination since it wasn't specified. Other than that, there is nothing to complain about as I like this story. I have yet to finnish it, so I'm looking forward to seeing how will Gajeel win the heart of Levy for the secont time.

Loved this story!

I keep telling myself i have to review cuz this story is really tugging atmy emotions and my feels! But im loving it! I like how what they are going through is real! Im actually really lovingyour ability to smootly go through your story and effectivly describe scenary and other characters thoughts and emotions! GreatJob!

This chapter made me so happy I was tearing up, GaLe is my favorite ship and I want to thank you so much!

Oh my God! I literally cried of sadness and happiness. I think I'm crazy. And i'm charging and blaming awesome story for making me cry. Squeeeeeee! THIS IS AMAZIIIIING! I THINK THIS IS THE BEST GAJEVY STORY I'VE EVER READ!

Ooops. Sorry for the capslock. I can't contain my feelings. I loved Gajevy even more because of this. Thank you, author! Wooow. Just... Wow! Mind blown. Phew! This should be submitted to Hiro Mashima-sensei for the Gajevy story. Hahahahahaha. Well... OMG, AGAIN! DARNIT! I CAN'T GET OVER IT. THIS IS JUST SO... LOVELY! I can feel different emotions. Thank you so much for sharing this to us! You are awesome! Btw, i love how very in-character Gajeel is. And the Gajevy Alliance and Ian Lovers is phenomenal! I love the fact that you include the members timely.

Many more to read! Thank you so much! I guess i need to shut up now. I'm going to show this to my Gajeel! Hohohoho! Gihi. Mwa. :)

-Dhime

Ah, it was fantastic to read, perfectly timed and balanced out. It gave me the right amount of heart wrenching pain and butterflies and squeals of joy xD. All and all well done I would say.

Such a sweet ending after all that turmoil!

Still one of my favorites! Hope you write more!

I was grinning like an idiot the entire time. Oh my gosh.

I love it, it was amazing and the ending is so sweet and heart warming. It's ...oh my god I can just feel the love TTvTT, great job hope you keep writing. 3

Okay first thing I want to say is this was absolutely adorable and beautiful and heart breathing and tear jerking and it really posses me off and made me laugh and made me want to hit something. That's how I know this was good - because this is exactly how I react to my favorite books XD.

Now that said... I have some constructive criticism.
I read your authors notes and I know that you've already revised grammar errors and such. I just wanted to tell you about some you missed.
First I noticed throughout the story sometimes the word "mage" was "mange" and the word "breathe" was "breath" and there was one thing in chap 11 (I think) where the "e" and the "i" in the word "their" was swapped.
Also just one more thing. I really loved your story. Don't change a single bit of the story line. But in chap 3 (I think) I adored the parallel of Levy and Gajeel waking up at the same time and all but what they did after was just a little too similar. Maybe change that just a bit.

Again your story was amazing and I really loved it. And you can disregard my criticism if you want. It's your story after all! But I do hope to read more of your stories in the future, so please keep writing!

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO t-...-

This was amazing! I absolutely could not stop reading. Thank you so much for writing.

My only comment would be that several words throughout seem to have been auto corrected.

Tomb for tome
Piece for peace
Etc

*clicks all the follow and fave buttons

Oh god "a tornado and natsu." God I love Fairy Tail jokes... Except for when you tell them in public. Then it's just "oh god why did I say that in front of these non believers. Oops, anyways I FREAKING LOVE THIS FANFICTION! A few grammar mistakes and word misplacement but that's probably me being me. Can't wait to read more of your work!