john phoenix broken

This was such an amazing, heart-warming story. I think you do amazing capturing everyone's characterizations. Phoenix certainly isn't one for words. His actions tell you how he really feels. I loved how everyone worked together to help the hardheaded fools to get together. Franziska's & Maya's interaction in the bathroom was really good. I can totally picture that. Yes! A mention of Klavier! I just adore him. I ship him & Apollo sooo hard lol.

Feenie had a lot of guts singing in front of a crowd! I'd die! But hey, love makes you do crazy things lol. I really loved the locket too. And the epilogue of the dancing was great!

Anyway, great story! :)

Two Birds by Regina Spektor is oddly fitting hahah

YAASSS! WOOOOOOO!

It's unbelievable how easy it is to play Micheal in the Bathroom during this bit...
...And weep.

Come one Maya, didn't you hear that Nick drowned himself on juice because he was sad. He obviously missed Pearl and your company. :(

Oh come on Maya, the more the merrier. Besides, there are worse people to invite, remember Pheonix's first girlfriend? Now that's someone no one wants to meet ever again.

I think Maya's hormones hit her until now because wow! She became THE diva in a few seconds. And poor Nick, he's at a complete loss on what to do.

*Dog-Whistle* That's exactly what Nick wanted to do ;)

I just read through this aaaall tonight! I loved it! Very cute. Definitely going to be reading the rest of your stories soon, especially the sequels to this. :D

Haha I'm from Alabama and this OC waitress you made really hit home where it counted. Great job!

Again, cheesy. Ending fits like the last piece of a puzzle in your story. :v

Unless I have absolute reason to read T3B, I'm gonna go ahead and skip it for now and finally head to TE... Which is gonna entertain me as my time to cross the river Styx is approaching (which is college).

I enjoyed it, I did. It's a fun, curiosity read that filled my entertainment whole.

Ha. A rather nice touch-up from all the drama they felt. Im lacking on things to say here, though. XD

Cheesy. Finally she realized she can be of a brat sometimes. Well, I guess that ends it on a positive note. Pretty much good for a Phoenix Maya story.

I know its published before the Anime, and the Anime has a different canon than the game, but... Just wanna lay this one out that Nick is *fond* of The Steel Samurai, evident is that he stayed up late to watch a whole bundle of DVDs for it (though the Anime made Nick pull of the covers by one hand, afraid to even get too much skin contact with her).

Anyway, not gonna comment about Ema Skye because I actually dont like her at all... I AJ. Shes likable enough in AA and AAI.

Desperate times call desperate measures, huh? Though again, I have preference, it's fitting for the situation here, considering how much of a dense mofo Nick is.

I have to comment about the overlooked situation about Rise from the Ashes (one of my faves), it's pretty heavy with Mia implications *shrugs*

Looks like you'd noticed the bullets already. Though if you wanna convince someone, you have to have more than few hard-hitting ones. Even small and trivial ones have bigger impact, too, you know?

MVP for Franz. Loving her here.