He shouldn't be so open with secrets. Don't let him join cinder. Giving a purpose is just a cliche anime bullshit that mindlessly loyal villians use to justify why they did crimes for their bosses. Naruto isn't broken, he just got sent to another world. He shouldn't even consider joining cinder. His interactions with her should end after the job is done like any good mercenary. Even then, it should be just a 'the jobs done', show her proof and go away. A shinobi shouldn't just work for one person so if cinder wants him to work under her, the best thing she can do is to hire him long term. You've already messed up shinobi Naruto so just make him mercenary Naruto. The one

Naruto was trained most of his life not to give way any information about him self

dear God can no one original why do you feel the need to have him explain everything about him self he just met them. if strangers walked up to u an asked you about your self would you tell them your life story or just don't answer

If you need any ideas for dust usage, I have a few you might be interested in: one of which is a pair of boots imbued with wind and dust the lowers him to run very quickly (imagine superspeed), another idea is to interview his clothing with earth dust, giving him bulletproof clothing.
These are just a few ideas I have, please contact me via Private Message if you are interested in some of the ideas dust manipulation I have.

Please finish this story. Love this idea of dark/grey/bad-guy Naruto, So keep up the good work.
Also, not sure if you're aware or what, but I thought you should know there are a few grammar/spelling errors spotted throughout your story. Just thought you should know, no pressure.

Why would someone with such a mercenary personality, an ACTUAL mercenary infact, be so free with information? Yeah sure, you state that he wants them to trust him, but that's stupid. Why the fuck would he need them to. He JUST fucking met them. For all intent and purpose, they're just another job at this point. And to go as far as telling them what his abilities are!? That just shatters any suspension of disbelief on the readers part. I'm done.

I'd say she's about twenty-three

Masterful work

hope you take it easier on Jaune in the rewrite

if ya doing repost wanna let him keep ability to gather nature energy or at least learn it. Using aura.

GOD BLESS ITS STARTING AGAIN

DO NOT DELETE THIS ONE PLZ

What about your other stories? Are you continuing 'A New Beginning'?

Will it be here or a different story

I am hoping that nary to regains his chakra.