Hope to read more.

I really love this part "Honestly, it was quite unnerving how bubble-wrapped he was by his father. Just the slightest pant and the man would send him straight to the doctor saying he was dying!" I thought "Awh that's so typical of Sheryl, well that IS what I love about him." I thought of this chapter as the sad and pitiful part for poor little Neil... T.T I mean his TRUE Father doesn't even give a damn about him... I wanna cry just thinking about it.. But Sheryl is doing everything to Spend time to the Little boy even though he at times over exagerate things. I FEEL like Sheryl wants to give Neil and Tyki some time together because he understand the Kids Feelings of loneliness and being locked up in thei mansion... Oh My... I just feel so sorry...

ANYWAY It has been so long since I've typed this long for a review, you definitely deserve It!

Love you!

I think this is what I would call a filler chapter though I don't really mind.
I love how you made Allen jealous or a bit possesive of Kanda. I kinda like those kinds of lover... XD
ANYWAY I just wonder how will you make use of The Thief G arc in your Fanfic?
I just want to read nore of it I wonder when will ya update!
PLEASE WRITE MORE!

OH MY GOSH Oh If You only know how much I want you to know how much I love how well you write your OC's I want to give you praise for what you did in your story The Ray Of Hope
Honestly that was the first ever fanfic that I really loved to read not only because of the well written plot but also the OC's
Now I kinda get where this story goes, I just wonder what is little Kris role here... Is he a ghost or some kind of Neil's guardian angel?
I get so excited with this...

WRITE MORE LUV YOUR STORY

Y'KNOW I've already read the first part this story I think last year or two I still remember the events specially the beginning and the end butnot the middle parts so I think I need to re read so chapters any way I still have no Idea whats gonna happen but I am excited because I've already read your other stories like The Lovers Sin and The Ray of Hope these to are my favorites any way Sometimes I prefer stories that are already finished...
But I also look for stories that are still actively updated or ongoing...
I hope you'd continue this 2nd part up to the end
I love your writing style!

WRITE MORE PLEASE! XD

You ever going to update?

Question will Kanda and Allen have a kid together

Its cute I cant wait for the .next chapter

I like jealous Allen, shes funny. This chapter was entertaining, I'm looking forward to reading more!

OMG I can't wait for more!

I have so many things in my mind on how great this chapter is , I would like to type it in here but I can't find the word to describe it...

Anyway... You did a great job in introducing Niel! You even describe on how his life went with the Noahs!

You are simply one hell of a writer, Madame/Sir!

(Bad grammar.. sorry :D)

Awesome! Im looking forward to reading more

Yay! I'm really happy you've finally started on the sequel. Great chapter, and can't wait for more!