| Reviews for Welcome To The Family (Revision) |
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   Serelena chapter 1 . 9/2/2018 Thank you for sharing your story! The first chapter is great! I only have one suggestion/request. Can you provide us with more details about how Eva looks? Right now we only know that she is 4’9’’. |
| NatalieLynn chapter 1 . 8/30/2017 Great start! |
| AnimeLover229 chapter 4 . 8/5/2017 for a virgin, she is very brave...are you sure she is a virgin? but really matt out of all the people that you could chose you matt was the one to take her virginity? on other hand she could do worse, I just hope they wouldn't be dating now because matt is soooo boring. also can you write more about how the other characters react to her because until now its just looks like she is not even their and you just writing what was seen on the show. keep up the great work. |
| alniyat chapter 17 . 8/4/2017 Thanks for the heads up and for continuing the story. This is great news. Looking forward for the rewrite and new chapters! |
| animexchick chapter 17 . 8/3/2017 Spent the afternoon having a good old binge on this, love it! Can't wait for more :-) |
| akagami hime chan chapter 17 . 8/2/2017 Take your time! this should be fun for the readers AND the writer so just update whenever we'll be waiting! |
| DawnDream9435 chapter 17 . 8/1/2017 hope you upload soon, i love this fic! |
| guest chapter 4 . 8/1/2017 wow she's a slut. |
| NatalieLynn chapter 17 . 7/31/2017 I'm glad to hear you're working on this again. I'd like to suggest that you post the rewritten stuff as a new story rather than deleting the old chapters and posting the new ones here. When you do that, it makes it impossible for those of us who have reviewed a chapter in its first incarnation to review the reincarnated version. Posting the two side by side also lets us compare your new version to the old and off constructive criticism about the changes you made. Just a suggestion ... |
| ThePhantomismyLove chapter 16 . 6/12/2017 Please write more. - si good |
| hanlue chapter 16 . 3/13/2017 Hi, I know that this story is on hold but I hope you manage to update again! I liked your writing style, I hope you don't kill Kol! |
| FizzWizz2011 chapter 16 . 8/11/2016 loving the story so far, update soon |
| NatalieLynn chapter 16 . 6/5/2016 I'm so glad she made up with Rebekah, but wish Kol would have stayed behind to be near her. From the way Bekah was questioning her about what transpired between them, he may be more invested in their relationship than she thinks. Great chapter! |
| ThePhantomismyLove chapter 15 . 5/6/2016 Please write more |
| Mrs.IsaacLahey14 chapter 15 . 3/21/2016 Wow. Wasn't expecting her to be that but it's cool |
