Loved this

I can totally see all of this in canon. Particularly like how you showed the guy's descent into madness, and Al's playing at being the Fullmetal Alchemist. Good attention to detail on how dangerous water is to him.

*giggles* One benefit of being stuck in a suit of armour- less effort required to "hide" one's facial expressions. Though Al manages to be impressively expressive despite this.

So SUGIO and descriptive!
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