Reviews for The Truth in Lies |
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Loveanimelove chapter 4 . 6/24/2018 i love this story but i was not really thinking that it be H/D i still like it and have favorite it great jod:) |
Kimi Lowe chapter 9 . 8/8/2017 Love the Story. Can't wait for more... |
mckertis chapter 1 . 9/22/2016 So what ? Lily was just randomly a slut ? Where's the backstory ? |
Stasia Ravenclaw chapter 2 . 8/5/2016 Why were Sev and Lily shocked when he mentioned Sirius\Padfoot he explained remembered him when he first met Sev also why did he need his eyes fixsdd they were fixed when the charms were dropped also why was the healer complaining harry was abused they already healed it before see sevs grandfather and why is he saying he is Harry Snape when he was introduced as Harry Prince last chapter ~Stasia |
Gleas chapter 5 . 4/22/2016 Um... Petunia and Dudley are living with Snapes now? Didn't they chuck Vernon into jail at least? I frankly thought he was ashes by now |
Gleas chapter 4 . 4/22/2016 Your story is all over the place. Harry met Lucius before and he just now acts as if they met for the first time. There are many inconsistencies from one chapter to the other. Though the initial plot was nice, this piece needs a lot of work to make it flow better |
Thorilian chapter 9 . 4/7/2016 Yes please! More please! |
marthapreston4 chapter 6 . 3/14/2016 this took a turn for the disturbing they are discussing have sex with children with a grown man . there is no way to make that okay . I can no longer read this |
WinterWind14 chapter 9 . 3/13/2016 This is a great story. I hope Lily grows up a little but I guess that will take time. Please update! |
Sincerely-ADedicatedFan chapter 9 . 2/2/2016 love it! more please! |
mizzrazz72 chapter 9 . 2/2/2016 What is Lily thinking? She got her life back, why did she have to be like this? |
kirsty21 chapter 9 . 2/2/2016 cool update soon thanks |
Sailor Tala chapter 9 . 2/2/2016 Awesome chapter please update soon |
marthapreston4 chapter 4 . 12/25/2015 this is where i feel like they jumped the shark a little |
asiya halima kone chapter 8 . 12/7/2015 please update soon :) |