This is a really good crossover story. Really liked your plot and writing. Thanks for this story and I hope you are able to come back to fanfiction and write more such harmony stories!

Now see, I thought they could just ensure a wedding and then have wickham die in an accident. this seems rather unnecessarily complicated.

awesome

Really enjoyed your story thank you

Have read several of your stories, and they are fantastic!

Good story, very nice.
Thanks for writing.
I really enjoy reading your stories.

A very nice resolution to this story. I was glad to see all the paradoxes ironed out.

This is a story I'll keep and reread. Thank you.

TGM

An interesting and elegant method to solve both couples' problems. So the now all that is left is to get Lydia and George married, maybe Elizabeth and William too and for the Potters to get home and end the rest of Voldemort.

And maybe to track the Darcy's descendants!

TGM

Mrs. Bennet as a Molly Weasley clone does work and fits both worlds well. I like the way Darcy and Elizabeth's relationship is progressing. I'm sorry that Harry and Hermione will likely not be able to stay for their wedding.

I like the way you are taking your time and showing both pair's acclimatization to the others world.

TGM

Certainly it's no surprise that the four are simpatico so soon. Elizabeth is a nearish match to Hermione in intelligence (it would be fun if Hermione turned out to one of her descendants! Time paradoxes indeed).

And of course she cut right to the chase, Wickham must die, most likely at their hands.

Very good story.

TGM

A good way to integrate 'Pride and Prejudice' into JKR's world. It makes a lot of sense. It will be interesting as to how these non-magicals will react to the knowledge of magic.

It would be interesting to se them interact with the wizarding world of this time, if you take in that direction.

TGM

I like the way you've started the story. Canon certainly show us a flawed Dumbledore, a Dumbledore who played an enormously deep game, very close to the vest. He left an awfully lot to chance, if his plans didn't go exactly to expectation, there would be disaster. This was a hole in JKR's canon.

You found a nuance in canon I'd not noticed and it is a good hook for the story. I like the idea of the binding curses they used. The idea of Harry being the stronger of the two in the matter of will makes sense; in canon, we see it in both GoF and OotP. The idea that Voldemort is diminished with the destruction of the Horcruxes is sensible, covers what I view as a hole in canon. I used it in one of my own stories, which I'm in the process of rewriting as a multiple chapter story.

I'm glad to see they don't plunge into action, that they end up preparing for an additional 13 years makes a lot of sense; for once they were prepared and had a plan, moreover they have both the experience and knowledge to improvise when the plan inevitably hits a snag.

A good start to what should be an interesting tale.

TGM

Awesomess!

Nice ending, and I LOVE how you shot down the Weasel! *EVIL GRIN*

Loved the story. Thanks so much for writing it.