hahaha you made natsu like a weakling are you stupid? Your fanfic is a total TRASH !

I just read the final chapter, and I’m fucking pissed. You leave the biggest cliffhanger possible, then just discontinue it just like that? What the actual fuck! You couldn’t even finish writing the fucking fight you were in the middle of, you just said “fuck it I’m done” in the middle of the most climactic moment you could possibly write you absolute piece of shit!

... this fanfic has one glaring hole that I just can’t stand. You keep saying that Natsu is weaker because he lost half his magic and got surprised, however most of his strength is physical, not magical. Even at the start of the series his strength and speed would make any standard fallen angel a pushover for him, and his senses make it so it’s practically impossible to surprise him, especially when the one doing the attack is just a few feet away.

hope you your doing good and please update such a great story

It's a shame, it's a good story, but anyway, we all have our problems, I hope you are well, greetings, congratulations, bye!

this is the most pathetic natsu ever not even wendy would lose to raynare and i am talking about before she joined fairytail now you made natsu lose to these losers i can just smell the cannon events from here even issie was not this pathetic

That last line is the greatest thing ever

Esta historia se venia a morir desde hace rato ya pero bueno al menos se disfruto. Adiós patético autor

With my short existence I can make a difference I can be there for him, concentrate don’t you want him to live!

Kibas sword fighting instructions are a reference to this song from Steven universe which is tied for the best cartoon of all time right up there with gravity falls.

how the fuck did he die against raynare? is he that fucking weak?

Please keep writing I read this story 8 times and it's still amazing

Please don't give up

Please update

i don't care what anyone says this story is amazing

Please continue this story