This is so sweet they are so cute together and I love how you wrote shinichi

Thats so cute. Kaito is treating Shinichi very precious-ly and Shinichi knows Kaito so well and cares about him just as much. Ahh I can't get enough on how you write them together! Even if they're not married yet (or going to be) they show so much love for each other.

They make a good couple. I swear. And Shinichi can just as easily turn the tables as Kaito.
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OMG THIS WAS AMAZING! I CAN'T EVEN DESCRIBE HOW INCREDIBLE YOU ARE! I love the idea of the story, the way you wrote it and just how Kaito and Shinichi interact. Everything was so beautiful and I want to give you a enormous hug! I love how they both cared for each other so much and when they knitted hands and how much they cared and XD the ring OMG I just... I love everything! EVERY SINGLE DETAIL! I hope you achieve every single dream you wish for because you're awesome and awesome people deserve awesome things, I mean it's just logic. I adore their little thoughts in italics as well! And the adorable just everything, you made my heart float like I loved this so much! One of the best fanfictions I have ever read.

It is so cute, its nice that shinichi want to protect kaito by hiding his pain, and i like how both of them seems in balance whether who's the seme and uke in relationship. Good job.