oof what a story, though I'd like to see it finished if you know what I mean. very good job on it

Uhm sorry excuse me but..WHERE IS THE UPDATE XDDD

Where’s the rest of it?!

Weiss, her Guardian, their love... it can’t end there!

I'd actually be a little curious to see your writing style now. This story is awkward and dripping with immature scenes and events, but I bet it being a few years since you wrote this, your writing has improved somewhat.

Jesus Christ, self-inflicted angst triggers me so fucking hard.

Aw~ I really like this story and was hoping you could continue it, unless I'm missing something here I really hope you finish the story because it's great! Considering many others like it, yes? It'd just be great. \_(ツ)_/ •(-'~'-)•
XoXo to the author and all!

I really hope this story continues at some point. it is certainly one of the more interesting ones out there. There was a story about the roles being reversed, but this one is mainly without any Supernatural things and I love just the purity of it.

A shame this story had to end so soon. I was really looking forward to the WhiteRose couple officially being together. I truly hope you might one day find the motivation to continue the story because it is one of the best I've read on here but I do thank you for the awesome chapters I've been able to read.

I like the Princess Bride reference. This is a great story so far, I can't wait to read on.

Awww, that's too bad. I was really getting into this fanfic. Anyways, I hope you'll find inspiration to update once again :)

This is a good story. I really like the setting, too. I also hope that Weiss and Ruby can be together.

Just to say this, scythes in battle can be used to hit and run, one of the sole reasons why Scythes are good for Ruby is because she is fast enough to change directions almost instantly, but it is a fact that against other weapons scythes are not that pratical normally, which is why ruby's semblance works so well with one.

And this is just to help, Team RWBY i made by an Archer, a Fighter, a Mage and a Rogue, Ruby's main weapon is not her scythe but her sniper, though she is insanelly good with both, she is mainly a ranged fighter, so giving her a bow or a cross bow would be a good choice.

No please dont pu this story on hiatus ive been waiting for the next chapter

What streaming service will you guys be using?

That's a shame, I really like this story and want to see more of it, I hope you get out of the slump soon