You have to continue this! Another chapter please :)

Cute!

EARLY BIRTHDAY REVIEW I AM EPIC

3C, you made me actually CONSIDER Fremione and not sigh over Dramione, so a big plus! Cutely written and quite imaginable, no doubt ;)

There are a few SPaG errors, so I'd suggest going through it critically, for e.g.: unnecessary capitalisation: "...sighed, "Then.." should be "...sighed, "then.." IMO, though I ain't no perfectionist either xD There are a few more of the kind.

Nitpick over, but I found it a bit hard to believe Fred would call Hermione "Granger", though I let it pass as I was busy laughing in anticipation :)

Rather cutely written, and a good job with Hermione's fluster!

Happy birthday!

Early birthday review so I don't forget later. I've never read a Fredmione before. I like the bits about Lee probably hanging the decorations because he knew it would annoy people and the twins confetti related pranks. Nice characterization on the twins. I love how they rib each other.

lol at Hermione yelling at her brain. :D did he have freckles everywhere? bwhahaha oh naughty naughty Hermy. Merlin's tits? bwhahaha I'll have to use that at the very earliest opportunity. She needs... chicken...? OkieDokie Hermy, whatever you say. We've finally found something that makes Hermione stupid, and it's Fred. Love it. And he's so ginger smooth. This was a great little piece. Hope your b-day is a happy one. :)

That was cute :)

Fred seems to have a rather interesting nickname there... That was a fun one shot!
XOXO
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I loved this! It was really really good. Also, I forgot to say on my review to Unconditionally that if you could PM me your twitter, that would be cool. :D

You have to continue it!

Please continue it and write about the date :)

Loved this! Xx