Reviews for The True Master Arrives (A Pokemon Fanfic)
Guest chapter 10 . 2/19
Ok first, Misty being able to beat both Sceptile AND Infernape is kind of bullshit. I get Kingler, but those other two are on completely different levels. Second, how do you know Ash doesn't keep in contact with his other friends? There's something called off screen time you know? It's not just because they don't show up (which only happens because the show has to focus on the new traveling companions. This is not a character trait of Ash, it's just the writers doing the obvious thing) that they don't matter. Stop assuming Ash is an asshole even though you have no idea if he actually did something or not.
Guest chapter 15 . 1/29
Hahaha you are an idiot. Why? The first few time you say its another cliffhanger was okay, but it kept saying it over and over made it sad like you aint got a clue what a cliffhanger is. Its like sitting down and pooping on the toilet not kniw when you will finish pooping. Should really learn how to "another cliffhanger". Wait wait wait, not sorry.
syakirmuhammad57 chapter 6 . 8/20/2019
awesome chapter.
syakirmuhammad57 chapter 5 . 8/20/2019
awesome chapter.
syakirmuhammad57 chapter 4 . 8/20/2019
awesome chapter.
syakirmuhammad57 chapter 3 . 8/20/2019
awesome chapter.
UltimateCCC chapter 46 . 8/19/2019
Make sure OCs don't throw off the main summary of the story.
thor94 chapter 4 . 8/19/2019
inconsistent chapter:
archie, maxie and ghetis are supposed in high security prison under interpol control, cyrus lost in some dimension and lysandre is supposed dead.
syakirmuhammad57 chapter 2 . 8/19/2019
awesome story.
MrPeaches88 chapter 45 . 5/31/2019
I really don’t understand why ash doesn’t use stronger Pokemon to take out Team Rocket..He’s fighting the admins of TR and you have him send out a Riolu and a Donphan?!
not only that but him NOT using his Aura in a battle because of an “unfair advantage” is absolute bullshit! He’s taking down a Crime Syndicate! You use every advantage you have!

45 chapters and you’re not even halfway through the story too. Makes me think that this is never gonna get finished.
MasterofInfinity chapter 1 . 4/1/2019
Didn’t read the story yet, but happy birthday to you!
Power Taco chapter 1 . 2/24/2019
I pick Sabrina. Ash saves her from her darkness and from being a monster. She's a super powerful physic, and it wouldn't be a shock if she had a thing for him. Couple that with her bringing an interesting edge to the group (and she's prob still not good at dealing with people so dealing with Ash's group would probably help her out a bit) and some creative problem solving.
Neoshinra chapter 45 . 2/17/2019
Short yet suspenseful. Team Rocket will fall.
My picks for legends are still the same: Mewtwo, Latias, Hoopa & Volcanion.
List of girls for Ash(apart from the core 5): Zoey, Anabel, Angie, Lyra, Duplica,
Casey, Bianca(Unova), Georgia, Burgundy(to spite Cilan), Melody,
Korrina, Shauna(Kalos), Miette, Nini(Performer), & Aria(Kalos Queen)

That is a big list. I'll still read this story, cause it's fun
Korin Dragoon chapter 45 . 2/16/2019
well I wasn't thinking of the rescue specifically when I made the OC offer, though she would assist in her own way when that happens, she's not much of a fighter, she's a strong battler but doesn't like fighting.
UltimateCCC chapter 45 . 2/11/2019
Rescue is imminent.
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