That's totally understandable. Take all the time you need!

Sorry for the late review, things have been rather hectic at work as of late, but I was finally able to catch up on reading your story this weekend.

It's interesting to see how Nachtigal made Chris his heir to Rashugal; I'm interested to see the road this will lead Chris after Milla's sacrifice. Will Chris take the throne and continue the war against her father, or will she try to make peace with her father? Either way, I'd like to see how this will play out.

Hope your job is going well and that you're still writing. Keep up the good work, and good luck in writing future chapters. Looking forward to your next update!

Veri n1c3oWDst0riIt

Sorry that you're going through some difficulties, Firework. If you ever need to talk, feel free to message me here on fanfiction, or you can email me at meloetta093 gmail . com

Also, I really like the idea of Gaius having a soft spot for his daughter. I feel like it's only natural since, as you said, he's a father. Of course he feels something for his children. I think his backstory in this AU is actually really sad. He had to put his family second for the sake of his country, causing him to miss out on both his children growing up and causing one to resent him. It's sad since he really has no ill intentions when it comes to Chris, but she's painted this face of him being the enemy and the one person she has to get away from, when all Gaius wants is for her to be safe.

This is probably my favorite tales fanfiction tbh lol Keep up the great work!

And please remember that you can feel free to come to me if you ever need anything :)

Sweet a new chapter and it’s finally time for Chris to meet her dad again

I’m curious but would you be open to doing a story for berseria and zestiria since they’re in the same world just timelines apart the oc could be a Malak or daemon so they live through both stories

You made her the heir of Rashugal? Talk about a twist.

Please dont kill off Agria, she and Leia would be good friends.

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I think I'm most looking forward to Chris' return to Kambalar and her seeing Gaius again.. I want to see how everything turns out! OMMMGGG I JUST LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH IT'S ONE OF MY FAV OC TALES STORIES
I CAN'T WAIT UNTIL UR NEXT UPDATE

Finally got the chance to read your story after so long, my apologies for the long wait.

I have to say, I do like Chris as a character; I enjoy her sarcasm and wit.

The Lilium Twin concept is an interesting concept and I can't wait to see how this will affect future events, especially when the Fractured Dimensions concept from Xillia 2 will come into play.

In any case, keep up the good work, hope you'll be able to update again in the near future. Good luck to you in your writing, schooling, and job hunts.

-Jula

Awesome about time for a new chapter and it’s really good too keep it up

Really like your story so far, I think you've written Chris to be a really natural addition to the cast. Her character is very human and very understandable. Your story also just a really nice way of reliving the game but with a slight twist. I hope you make a tales of xillia 2 fanfic with Chris in it and maybe a story for what would be a third installment even though a third game will never come out.

Wow I haven't heard from you in a while! Its nice to see you update this story, haha. Been a while since I checked out the Xillia archives. Either ways, I hope you will update the story soon!

OMG YOU FINALLY UPDATED

This is an awesome story! I'm looking most forward to when Gaius teams up with the main group later on! You know, the next time they reach kanbalar (totally speleld that wrong-)

Well, this was a long time coming. Good read.