YES GIRL you sense your daddy and he come to save yoU!

murder indeed... good luck with at one Bail. Was really unsure if I wanted to read this or not. But, I am very glad that I choose to. This should be a great read, expecting lots from you!

Interesting it is to watch you grow as a writer as this story progresses.

If you ever get the time, it might be a good idea to clean up the first ten chapters, or have someone do it for you. The lack of some punctuation in the first one, in particular, can be a turnoff for some readers. I know it is for me, and the reason I got past them is because you are the author.

Oh I do hope that Syrena will get back in good grace and if she isnt going to be Inquisitor maybe she can be a handmaiden/bodyguard towards Leia. Would make Caden his job a little bit easier... or harder XD.

Well better follow this om A03 as well.

Oh poor Piett. He was one of the Imperials that I liked.

Read this chapter and Vader's threat and thought to myself that if Vader wanted to kill Palpatine he could just orbital bombard the shit out of his location.

Such a sad chapter! Great story so far. I find it very moving and exciting. I'm glad you're including a little romance in the story.

I was wondering when the peasent girl would show up again.

Nice to see an update.

Yup, FFN has been acting atrociously for months now.

I enjoy the premise (I am up to chapter 4 atm of a reread, did up to chapter 10 a year or so back), however the blatent (intended or not) Bail bashing, and subsiquent Vader walking all over Bail detract from the story, especially as it could be used to drive tension and addituonal plot elements, i.e Bail using it as an opportunity to spy on Vader or hamstring Vader with additional requirements for the care of Leia.

awesome update! thank for sharing! good luck with that prazak! I hope things with Luther go okay

Been a while since I’ve read this story. I’ll have to catch up!

please update I love this story and cant wait for next chapters

None of them

Man why do ppl keepa making characters act ooc just to include their own trash ocs. Vader would've killed this guy out of sight not give in to his demands like a pussy.