Fun read on all counts. I think Al probably got mythical Zoan, Bakeneko or Nekomata, so he can do spirit things and turn into a cat for the sun and food, but go full armour in battle, like you said.

Okay first of all this is a great story and I love it, second of all bribing people with sweets to beta your work has got to be the best idea I have ever heard of and WHY have I not thought of it before?! So thank you and I will now be using that tactic to get some of my own work betaed! :)
-SL xxxx

I really, really, enjoyed reading this. I wish there was more of it, I would really love to hear how Ed helped save Alabasta and learned to get along with the rest of the crew, but this one shot also works well by itself.

The human human fruit but Chopper already ate it

This is great, I love that idea for a fruit, and PB m&me are the best bribes, so congrats! You got a three-for-three score! Have a PB m&m! (PB) Also, you should write a sequel or something where Ed and the crew come back and kick a certain SOMEONE'S ***. And while hardly breaking a sweat, to boot.

I'm not quite done reading yet, but I've got to say, damnit, your voice for Roy Mustang is really spot on. Quite enjoyable to read. :D

Admittedly I don't know anything, really, about One Piece, but I wanted to give it a shot anyway because FMA is just so cool.

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Up to the part about the oil staining. Egad, that's a headcannon for me now. That's so like Edward.

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At the end of the fic now. Thanks for writing! It was most entertaining. :D I've noticed you have a few mistakes dotted around, but it's nothing a good proofread couldn't fix. :) I'm not 100% Edward would give up trying to restore Alphonse - I think he'd give up on himself, but he'd never be able to forgive himself for Alphonse. Still, that's not the point of this oneshot.

I had a good time. Thanks for writing! If you ever write for DP I might take a look. I can sympathise with you about Life though. It just gets in the way of doing what we really love so much, eh?

Best wishes,
-Sudo

Please do more with this
It would be a great story

it was really fun and greatXD GOOD JOB!

Wow, I had fun reading this XD My imagination's running wild with the thought of Ed joining Luffy's crew XDD
Good story but with a few errors; you misspelled the country's and Mustang's team's name. It's Amestris, Riza H., K. Fuery, H. Breda, and V. Falman. And a few spelling error, like 'had been the bane of his existence ever #since#'.
Keep up the good work!

I... I could totally see this happening. Great fic, short and sweet:)

I think Alphonse should eat a devil fruit that turns him into a boy like chopper that ate the human human fruit but it just turns alphonse into a boy

This is an amazing idea. It would be funny to see the interaction with Ed and the strawhats in the beginning. I would love to read more of this story if you decide to continue it! Your story was amazing!