Plz continue!

Sweet!

cool

continue

I like this Story, and I thought if you can make Utau as a Boy and behave like the Utau in the anime (you know younger, love his big sister to death) and might even kiss his beloved big sister. (Sorry if my english is bad i'm german) ;)

I finished the chapter and went to click on the next one. It wasnt there. Nerb. . . . . . . . . i want moooooore!

This story is awesomeeeee! And i want you to update! So i can find out what happens! :)

Laterz!
Screech

te quedo muy suave continúalo plis

Hi there, Cashew Dragon! So, a story that has Ikuto as main character, and Amu a kitty? Cute :3
But it's not like I have seen a few stories like THIS before... Hehe...
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Ok, I confess, I have. But I think this one may have potential.

So, this is off to a good start, your punctuation is good, so is your grammar and spelling... Hm...

Just a tip here, your chapters are too short. And it's not good to chop the chapter in to separate chapters, you know what I mean...?
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Neither do I, what I MEANT to say was don't put the first episode into separate little chapters, and leave your readers on a "cliffhanger."

I know you think it creates suspense, like 'OOMGGERR, cliffhangerz WHY?!'

But it really doesn't. We already know what's going to happen because we have all seen the first episode and what happens it in, expect in this case Ikuto and Amu have swapped and some people have gotten a gender swap...

Anyways, we already know what's going to happen, so what's the point? Plus, it can make you lose interest fast, like me, I just skipped to writing this review instead of reading this chapter and half of the second one.

So put the first episode all together in one chapter, please? It'll make it look better, trust me.

Anywaaaayyyyssss, (I say that a lot) I hope I helped and wasn't to mean!
I get that you're new, and this whole writing a story thing may be a bit weird for you, but you'll get the hang of it soon enough!
It took me a long time to get my story up and running and looking good. (So... Many hours of... Rewriting...-shudders-.)

Oh and, PM me if you have any concerns, comments, want some help, tips, etc...
Sooo... Yeah. SEE YA! ;)