pretty good. would have been funnier if pacifica said after mabel menioned code 5, "I will pay you over a thousand to see that." Still, awesome, and surprisingly has dipper and pacifica in the same fanfic without shipping them. HOW IS IT HUMANLY POSSIBLE? :)

This is great. You do a wonderful job of balancing Pacifica's fear of her parents and her desires not to be them. Dipper and Mabel are also on spot and this is a great set up.

Dipper seemed weirdly hostile in chapter 2 if only in comparison to how welcoming he was in chapter 1. Not sure how much time passes between them.

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! *Mass Screaming* *Dipper screaming about his journal* *Mabel screaming for Waddles* *Bill screaming for his life* *Doors burst apart*
Me: I NEED MOAARR! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
Dipper: Give me back my journal!
Mabel: WHERE'S WADDLES!
Bill: DON'T KILL ME PLEASE ! ! ! !
Bill: *Looks around* *grabs Waddles*
Bill: HERE! TAKE THE PIG!
Mabel: NOOOOOO! *punches Bill* *grabs Waddles* *hugs Waddles*
Dipper: WhO ARE YOU!
Me: Oh me? Oh, don't mind me, just breaking the fourth wall. :D

So, Dipper made a gunpowder volcano. How did he not get arrested?

I really love the way you've written this fic, your way of wording things really fits in with the mood and Pacifica's thoughts

I really loved this story. It was so sad when Pacifica mentioned how her parents treated her and it was really sweet to see how Dipper and Mabel did everything that they could to comfort her. I loved how the twins had their own list of Codes to fit whatever situations and how Mabel made a bunch of mixes based off of events from her life. The banter between the trio was really funny (I wonder just how much money Pacifica would pay for a picture of Dipper in that lamb costume) and I loved how they had a mini golf match and sleepover together. The event with the party and the leviathans was really interesting and I like how Code 26 came from Dipper's failed science experiment (which I can totally see happening) and it was great to see Pacifica doing everything that she could to save the town and how she somewhat cared for the leviathans (even if she would never admit it). I'll bet that she'll be joining Dipper and Mabel on many adventures to come and The Mystery Twins will one day be The Mystery Trio. -TheGoldenYoshichu

I love a good redemotion story. And this was just perfect.

I am very happy with this continuation. I hope Pacifica may be able to join them in paranormal adventures every once in a while.

Or however you want to write it; you're the author.

I like your story! Update soon!

Both of these were wonderful scenarios and a pleasure to read. Code 12 was great for its heartwarming moments and the concept of Pacifica going to the twins for comfort is always enjoyable to read. Code 26 was very interesting and I loved how you explored Pacifica's potential in it. The possibility that her parents would force her to study various subjects like chemistry and how that let her bond easily with Dipper as well as her interactions with the Leviathans were both incredibly interesting concepts.

Wow, this is tons of fun. Everyone's probably already talked about how interesting the look at Pacifica's mindset is- but the plot's pretty fantastic, too. I really love the whole set-up with the leviathans and how the bracelet wraps it all up.

Awesome. This could've worked as an actual episode or short.

Keep on Writin' and Rockin'

Cute.

Keep on Writin' and Rockin'

That's really an awesome idea with those "codes", yku know. And yeah, that was awesome, you definitely can write good and that kind of stuff And you could develop your own, dunno, long-side-story about those codes and stuff? Think of it ;) 10/10