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I like this a lot. In a fairly short space, you were able to show the dichotomy of their relationship and the contrasts between how they view having legs vs. having a tail. Zac's recognition that having legs isn't his natural state is powerful because I don't think either of them really understood that until he spelled it out. They both also recognize that the potion is about more than whether Evie has a tail or not; ultimately, it's about whether they have a relationship or not. The bittersweet ending works for that very well.

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Wonderfully done. I liked reading this. :)

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Wow! Awesome! You're very good! :)

Very well written! Great job! I look forward to your other stories for Mako!

I did like this, but Zac is acting as if he won't live on land forever. But Erik said mermen grow up on land so Zac will still get to live a normal human life most of the time. :)

Again, I love it! Such a great fan fiction and I'm glad Evie gets her legs back.

And she does it again! You should be a real life writer!

I love it. It's not too depressing. Can you explore this story after the spell? I would like to see if the relation Zac/Evie will continue or not...