hope there will be more chapters

Good story so far, hope you plan to continue. I hope Christian is able to help Ana get away from those abusive parents!

THIS IS AMAZING! YOU MUST UPDATE.
LOVE HAZEL

I think if a person start something.
They should finish it.
Your story has a strong start, but you're like many fanfiction writers are not committed to deadlines.
Leaving a promising story for a long period of time communicate to your reader that your are not respectful of their time.
If you want a strong following, you must consider the readers time and that there are many writers for fanfiction.
You've style and great writing technique.
Finish your story.

Wow thanks for the very good read I hope you are going to finish this story.

Wow I am even scared for Ana. So for very interested in the story. Will keep reading.

I'm not reading anything written by someone who can't spell TOMATO, use an apostrophe, or capitalize words correctly. Pitiful.

Your off for a great start. More please

Im so glad that Christian has taken an interest in Ana and knows that her parents abuse her and about her scholarship that she wasn't allowed to take.

Ana even told him that people are watching her all the time. Who the hell just called her name that has her frightened? Hopefully Christian is still there and will really help her?

What a horrible way for her to live in fear of her parents and they are just awful to her. They are not only drug addicts but they took away her chance at making a better life for herself after she was accepted to college and they wouldn't let her go. They need to be put in jail for child abuse!

Then Christian walks into her restaurant which she waitress at and pays her some attention and she thinks that she ugly and not worth his attention.

Hey like your would love to read more. Kim

Please write more. This story is very good

Please finish this is a good read so far I like

hey i really like your story! like really! don't let some haters stop you! you've got one hell of a story xX

Yes please write more