Reviews for The Universe
anni1677 chapter 1 . 5/25/2019
damn. this is so great, I’m speechless
craftybookworm25 chapter 1 . 6/20/2016
I love stories through Truth's perspective. It usually shows a sort of basic or complex understanding of the world in a way that can't be shown if it was through another. I love most of your stories and I hope you continue to write.
Cupid-in-disguise chapter 1 . 6/13/2016
Wow just really wow. I read your other stories A Sorcerer's Science and Skill and I loved them both they are so amazing. So I decided to come and read a few of your other stories. And I am so glad I did. This was amazing. It was simple and short but I actually got chills reading it. The way you worded everything and the insight that was put in this story. The way you portrayed Truth and how it was all from his point of view. It was really just amazing. You may think this is a pretty rave review but really I could not like it more. Definitely one of my top favorite fics! -
Keep Writing,
Cupid
philster401 chapter 1 . 6/5/2015
This is one of the most beautiful things I have ever read on Fanfiction.
Phoenix Paladin chapter 1 . 5/30/2015
... I think my brain just melted... either that, or the alcohol's kicked in.
Gamma Cavy chapter 1 . 3/12/2015
Wow. You caught Truth, completely and absolutely. It makes sense that Ed would be the first human it encountered to understand Equivalence, because others who understand even a fragment of equivalence would know better than to try to raise the dead and meet Truth.
But even those who understand that Equivalence exists, and some things there are no trade for, don't live it. They acknowledge its the way things work, and that's it.
But Ed lives it.
Equivalent Exchange is in his blood, the air he breathes, his heart, mind and soul, every fiber of his being. Its the rhythm his heart beats to, and the underlying component of his every thought. And so he can understand Truth's question, arrive at the Answer, and overturn Truth's reality.
That's why Truth likes him.
Mcat9905 chapter 1 . 2/25/2015
I love things from truths perspective. I like the way it wasn't so much conscious thought as a story being told, I think that captures the essence of truth more. Nice job.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/25/2015
That was a beautiful turn you took with that last paragraph. Nicely done!
hi chapter 1 . 2/25/2015
so painfully good...T-T...