Keep writing this is good

This is such a great story. I love your confident Harry and Remus. PLEASE update this. It is too good of a story for you to abandon.

I am really enjoying this story. The confidence Harry has is great. Are you going to write more?

Please tell me your going to write more? This is bloody brilliant I love it!

This is amazing, it would probably be a bit easier to read if you paragraphed it more though. Please update soon!

If you are taking over for the original author you need to do editing of the original. Making sure it is easily readable. Having huge paragraphs makes it a trial just to get through them. and making sure the correct spelling is also a big help, as well as making sure you use the correct word when there are more than one spelling for the same sounding word. Such as "there, their, they're". This is a good topic to write on and I hope you continue to finish this. Keep up writing. Best of luck.

Brilliant update, can wait for the next chapter!

cool update soon thanks

wow i mean wow
loved it
please do continue
bye sumi

Fun story so far and quite a difference in Harry with the addition of his returned family. I like the confidence level he portrays and passes along. Thanks for sharing!

I love your story. Thank you for writing it.

Nice job, thanks for the update can't wait for more.

I would say put Harry and Luna together and actually put Neville and Hermione together that would be a giant twist that nobody would expect

I hope the students convince Dumbledore to let them do quidditch.

Please update soon!~ although can you space out the paragraphs a little more? It's not really a big deal but it makes it harder for me to read.