Reviews for Temptation
Abhasclash chapter 5 . 1/11
Really nice "Hangover" references. much love.
Nigga chapter 6 . 4/1/2019
Ok we need confidentcup
1529 chapter 13 . 7/7/2017
This was a very good story until you turned Hiccup into a scumbag... there is absolutely no justification for cheating on someone with whom you are in a committed relationship. Honestly, Carly was completely justified in what she did and, by the end of this story, the 'bitch' became the wronged party. It could have been a great story.
Carl Solo chapter 13 . 5/20/2017
great story, very nice and tempting. hope to read the next one soon.
Carl Solo chapter 12 . 5/20/2017
Yeah about time.
Carl Solo chapter 11 . 5/20/2017
Yeah, this story is so tempted. Lol how he can let go something he love and stay With someone he didn't. So why is so dificult to decide.
Carl Solo chapter 7 . 5/17/2017
Yesss, a great day for hiccup. love this chapter.
Carl Solo chapter 6 . 5/16/2017
yeah this was a great chapter, we dont only see now hiccup mom, but the fight was great. if I was hiccup I send that bitch out of the house a soon she open the mouth. thanks for the chapter
Carl Solo chapter 5 . 5/15/2017
LOl, the test part was great , it make laugh so much. thanks
Carl Solo chapter 3 . 5/14/2017
nice chapter this is story is good and fun, thanks.
Carl Solo chapter 2 . 5/12/2017
nice chapter very funny at the beginning and Astrid help Hiccup to get lose a little. I dont know what he seen in Carly.
Carl Solo chapter 1 . 5/11/2017
This story have a good start very nice, but the way is been post is not good. all the dialog and narration is to much close together and that is making the story difficult to read. hope you fix that in the future.
Hannah chapter 13 . 4/20/2017
OMGGGG ! THIS WAS SO AMAZING THIS IS LITTERALY MY FAVE FANFIC EVER ! CANT WAIT TO READ THE REST ! AAAAAH
Guest chapter 13 . 4/19/2017
Snooze, ya lose, Hiccup. I look forward to the next installment. Thank you for your fantastic stories and for all your hard work! And, thank you for leaving us with some hope for their futures.
Guest chapter 12 . 4/19/2017
Let me guess, he waited too long and Astrid has already left, with no way to contact her?
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