Wow, this is remarkably good! It’s well written, well researched and just a fun read! Have you considered writing professionally?

so YES summing up Steve Rodgers experience right now all wonderfully.
And not going to change! Cause even Tony doing his thing….

But Logan!
No James Howlet I remember you from the war holy shit?
Still it was a nice ending, a beautiful one!
And hey saving a continent from silly stuff…..
And PROGRESS sheesh. As wonders increase so do horrors….

and yeah trust issues! and forced friendships let them go antural.. fire forged can do it but fire BURNS can end just as badly...

but hey.
them joking on his trust issues was nice.
I could talka bout a lot but honestly I'm surprised I found a nice story that wrapped itself up so well. thank you.

aww no vacation.
But no super hero lives? Such a sad thing.
And hell loving how much TIRED beyond belief and many miles before you can sleep.
Although shooting in eye means brain? Unless at angle. Although honestly taking the kdi into protective custody should have been done.. or strip him of WEAPONS at least.
Or not have meeting with presidents…
And honestly just killing them so they cant get up to MORE shit is probably best.

but hey. and yeah stupid names! but on the spot can cause some issues.
nothing ever ok but CARRY ON MY WAYWORD SON their be peace wen you are done...
watched to much supernatural in my day.
anyway!
loved the conversation of trust with Steve and Natasha there it was adorable and honest in its own way... yeah.
seriously enjoying a lot of this.

god I love how much people make assumptions about what Steve is saying.. seeing anything they want formt his… its kind of hilarious. Because Steve is also VERY much a role with it type.
But I love the dude shoots you and then you talk him into switching sides. God Cap is amusing.

but seriously I love all of the first reaction taking out the first guy and then your an idiot... sigh I know...

god. love what you do with Steven grant Rodgers its amusing.
seriously though amusing but also a lot of fun and hey! making the quin jet something different then just that thing that flies.

so relied a bit to much on unexpected mercy of the enemy.. Ig et why people do that Steve kicking ass totally leaves a him conqeriring but him vulnerable..

but Hey.

I mean I don't buy the Steve rushing into science Nazi torture bases of military and the camps hasent seen worse... but bad is still bad and hurt is still hurt.

but I like that hes NOT a comforting person in the heat of the moment that is NOT Steve in a lot of ways. perhaps afterwords given time to settle and prepare.. but still.
anyway. getting the vengeance... well. needed doing and getting done.

lots of fun! and other things. Natasha talking people through thigns because she feels stable and Steve panicking and yeah asking questions and KNOWING and yikes.

I forgot to mention hat in the wake of Hydra falling after attempting to take out the western world and most likely Russia them aiming to hide low in south America makes SO much sense give them cover and a place to BUILD while the world goes crazy and tries to purge them where they can... lots of sense.

and lordly lordy these agents are NOT trained...

but lots of fun. and good talks.
and Natasha is epic really.
teaching her something to give her a bit of calm later in life... good Natasha. Natalia.
and YES using and KNOWING yourself for stuff.
good on ya.

I appreciate a lot of what you do here.. and getting Steve to THINK about creating and building insititutions or SOMETHING to help work out and help other things...

also using the code words as something of a meta sense with actual point to it in a what do you even make those of a random word? but words with specific meanings and codes within themselves but not very public of sorts...
and Steve and that thought on letting Natasha down was LOVELY... god
because blindsighted!

and that thought about Steve being an old guy... actually CONNECTING with that thought if he had lived me might have reached this age in fact unless something killed him almost definatly...

god bits and bits you hitting right and the overall story is fun and... thank you for this! usually with stories I don't review until I'm all caught up but something about this has me curious.

god I find your Steve refreshing and Natasha giving him shit and Steve apologizing because HINDSIGHT and him not KNOWING the kirks or impersonal languages and codes of Spies that speak to trust and everything else... hes had a LONG day and life really.

but so adorable. and hey knowing and figuring out on the fly no lenglthy needed sicentiest and billions of money makeshift make DO.

and Steve on Parnoia knowing... sheesh so much fun.

its wuite lovely because in a lot fo ways Steve is NTO int ouch with his feelings is he? god so much fun.

ok actually handiling the mess of this…

and Yes the Shield KILLS. Most get distracted by it being a shield but it is a WEAPON and Steve is brutal guy.
He takes a defensive weapon and turns it LETHAL.

But I love the bit that he immediately ntoices their training because it IS important.
its tied into both Steve has experience with fighting that barely anyone left alive REMEMBERS campaighn fighting in WW2 and that is its own hell.

and part of me is sad that people died off here.. but it was a terrible fight and it happens and the ones that WERE the most surviviable are these two. it makes sense.

also thank you for not doing the your defeated strike me down in anger argument considering the situation it is NOT relevant or right way to handle thigns.
but alas they got out and away.
still love where your at.

and THANK you for the shield bit and handiling that WELL.

ha! coruse Hydra steals the shield. and Steve being silent about things and I want to show off and it immediately back fires... well.

WONDER of murder times. even fi cloning is a bit to prevelant and all...
ltos of fun times here.
but wow trying to do a wolverine army through Steve is a bit hilarious.

well. now its a matter of experience with your strength.
but hey ltos of thinking and Hydra Philosophy hitting again and again... man such a mess!

always a bit off with Steve captured hes useful in a lot of ways but him getting captured is always a bit.. but it makes SENSE he doesn't carry the shield any more, he hasent seemed to carry a guns ince the war nor a Knife... its all sorts of nuts.

but hey. all that rape allegories...

and I liked Steve figuring out the codes and fighting them on it.

godwins law… ha.
But hey looking at your worst traits done off…. And this while the team is having interpersonal issues.
And calling him out on the arrogance and lack of trust…. The bit of Steve was a good friend that was dead and lost and then MORNED while Steve had a good friend that lived on and died off on him and lived a LIFE without him to be emotionally connected in the same way.. and complete lack of trust because apart of the PROGRAM apart of the later INSITITUTION that HELPED create these stupid Hydras…..
Allowed them to survive.

but incompitenets! and Steve needs some guns. ALLOW him to he was in war while me might distain lesser tech because hew as fighting with stolen Nazi tech probably...
well.

but yeah learning lessons in a post shield world.

Natasha being motherly and Steve not considering it.. but yeah not sure on WHO you can trust is wonderfull because a lot of issues… but Nat being motherly to clones is oddly awesome. Being helpful and worried about your health.

But… the people that were cloning them were their ENEMIES and ASSUMPTIONS about what you know about them… well burns everyone their own which way.
and them being in Rio...
and using project INsight finding things... how scary...

Steve. The super assassin whisperer. GOD its adorable. And yeah fighting for the pain doesn’t quite work really.

But hey Anchor knock out is as good as any type of fight. And actually letting him FIGHT.. and being aware enough that things cans till WORK fighting is brutal and messy it aint math and health bars or anything like that. And it makes SENSE blunt impact being one of the only things… as good as the skull IS with antimantium… well the brain is all sorts of fleshy surrounded by something even HARDER sof ro impact… and hell VIBRATIONS… it works for Steve because STEVE but any this SHE takes its still inside her BODY.
Serisouly Steve the super assassin whisperer… but actually doing it proper caring about her but looking after his own folks…
aww faith and trust broken again.
although him maby getting kidnapped seems more likely? and yeah.
but also WOW hurting them relationships.. and Steve learning the lesson.

god Steve is adorable. No trust at ALL and it being exasperating is great. prickly as anything.

but practicality!

and hey a boat in the sea is a good place for all fo this.. hell actually using an effective but relatively known and accepted enemy for such stuff is done WELL.

hope Steve learns that throwing and joint locks fo sorts are going to be the best bet.

and Steve trying to do things his way and it coming across as something else and that bit about blood and kin and everything else...

sheesh your fun.