Grand story.
It woulda been great if the clone join Ketchum. He can be the young boy's Gandalf/Obi-Wan/Merlin, the wizard figure to the yougn hero.

Holy shit! This is amazing! I am stunned! And so utterly in love with the idea of Mewtwo joining Ash that I don't know what to do with myself! ARRRGH!

WHY is this only a one shot? Why isn't this a multi chapter story of complete badassary. Can you just imagine Mewtwo mother-henning Ash? Lol!

Please continue,this story is awesome. You match Mewtwo's thinking to a t.

Ok , now I want to read Ash's journey with Meet so with him.

I think maybe in May 19 , 2017 , since summers is about to begin , you should rewrite it.

It could be when Mewtwo meets Ash again , after being saved by him two times , and continuing exploring world in the nighttime after Mewtwo returns. Throughout everything Ash has done for him , along with other Pokémon from around the world. This Pokémon was impress and surprised how he learned so much from that boy trainer , his Pikachu and allies throughout all the regions.

I really loved it!

I really truly love the story. Maybe this year , you can rewrite it , similar , but with more chapters.

That atory's amazing! When Mewtwo experience Ash's care and protecting the Pokémon and this world after their many encounters , it inspires the Pokémon on everything that boy has done .
Hey , I have and idea . In 11/29/16 - 12/31/16 , you can work on special fanfiction , like this .
An evil force has join the fun for mass destruction , catching a special Pokémon than all infinity would ever combine into one. Group of different team agents from all region joined forces to capture this new mysterious Pokémon. Meanwhile in a paradise place , the Pokémon , including legendary and mythical Pokémon all sense the earth is in danger. They all decided to summoned their old human friend , Ash Ketchum and his old campanions from Kanto to alola

wow, that would cause so many changes. I wonder if any one will pick up this story and expand on it. If they did I know I would love to read it.

Not bad, but not entirely realistic. Well structured though, thoroughly enjoyable. Keep up the good effort.

Wow, this story is amazing! Can you write a sequel?

Not bad. Very short, and I also don't like those Pokéspeak either. Its childish, better use normal speech and put it in italic.
In general your writing style is not spectacular, but solid and good.
Mewtwo x Ash fanfics (be it as couple or just friendship) are very rare (sadly) and highly welcomed for me - so keep on!

I will upload my fanfiction, containing those two as well, soon.

This is an interesting story. I particularly liked the beginning.

I'm personally not a big fan of writing out Pokespeak, particularly if the listener can understand it – I'd just write what they are saying instead.

I actually liked this a lot. It gave a realistic view of how Mewtwo must feel about what has happened in his life. How you had him join Ash was perfect, making him press the button instead of having the ball thrown at him. My only complaint is that it is a one shot.

interesting.