Found at last

Cute

One of my favorite fics.

I particularly search this story. I hope you'll continue writing a narusaku story. Looking forward for your next one.

You've got a good story. BUT terrible writing. Rewrite it. Clean it up. Read it out loud until it sounds to 'your' ears, the way you want your story heard. Creating a good story can be hard, but creating a story that's good reading requires work. Put some work into it. ~jsm

Um I wanted to ask a question is she saying saying that if the uchiha do things like comfort her she'll still love him

Your story was so emotionalll i totally loved it :D

Great job on the chapter. I simply loved this.

I love it. I also love how Naruto express his felling and emotions for Sakura. I was glad that Sakura had the guts and courage to confess to him. If you ever decide to make it into a romance and adventure story between Naruto and Sakura. By adding some chapters. That be awesome. Good job on writing as a one shot. NaruSaku fan forever.

I agree more with the first review.

The story is good, or nice. Starts great though.

I think there are more than two mistakes in grammar that should be corrected, and the story would be better.

I didn't like the end that much. The part when they confront each other. It's like they just stated the obvious reasons that we, fans, know, and he just reflects them like nothing. With sweet words. Or may be that I was expecting a more realistic confrontation, in which both accept that circumstances and they themselves neither are, nor were, perfect, and they will accept that and move on, as a couple. But, hey, they are teenagers still.

Anywho. If the next stories are betaed or better revised, and with a little less of 'the expected dialogue', I know they'll be great, so, you're in the right path.

Very Nice

Lovely

it was good.

That was amazing I can barely talk it was perfect.

Nice.