Your writing flows beautifully. Everything about it screams author. But you hijacked Arrow just to be a showcase for your OC MarySue character that anyone wanting Arrow fanfiction could care less about. If you write Caden intros book I might care. But Mr Perfect isn't who I'm here for. It's flawed Oliver and his entourage I love. Here they're Caden's inferior sidekicks. And you even got them all slightly skewed cause they are only in your story to show how wonderful Caden is (to Felicity) or how superior his fighting skills are (against Oliver), etc. That's why OCs suck. They are usually too too perfect and it revolves around them...Its the Caden show. Or if OCs are on the side they are written as the more edgy friend (you know with tattoos, swearing a lot and sexually promiscuous). I want what I clicked on this site for Oliver Queen. Even if he's slightly AU. Not some made up super douper wonderful fantastic OC.

So... Os there ANY chance at all that you'll be continuing this? In all honesty, this fanfic is one of the best written Arrow fanfics out there and I'd really like it if you would continue writing it.

I really love this story so please continue to update it.

Good chapter

so any chance of an ocxlaurel because ive been looking for one of those for a while

Great chapter

Guess we'll find out what Lex wanted with the Queens sooner rather than later.

Felicity was funny as hell- good job on that. But as a die hard Olicity shipper, I hope her and Oliver get together.

Great chapter

It's gonna be Lex Luthor.

Good chapter. I'll still follow to see where it goes.

Great chapter

Easy. It's Victor Zzazz (or however you spell that).

Good chapter. I have to admit this story has lost my interest for the most part- Cade feels like a complete Mary Sue, and I'm just not jiving with it. Still, I'll glance at a new chapter to see where's it's going.

Great chapter...

Great chapter.

I wonder what the nanoparticles are for?

Can't wait for next chapter.