And you just let this tale twist in the tropical breeze?

NO. NO. and NO!

YOU WILL CONTINUE!

RESISTANCE IS FUTILE!

Amazing, this managed to achieve stupid and a half status in just a handful of poorly written sentences. Between characterization and plot, I don't know which is worse, well to be honest their both equally rancid, kind of Mary Sue meets goo. Probably the worst attempt at either of these fandoms I've seen recently, adn I've seen some pretty awful one, and certainly one of the worst crossovers.

There should be breaks in between scene/character changes. Also, more descriptions than just simple wordings.

I'm not a huge Buffy fan but I enjoyed this crossover. Great job! I look forward to more.

Congratulations on writing ur first fic I really enjoyed ur version of BA and I'm looking forward to the next update . I've been reading ur mother's fics for years and now I feel really old lol.

BA forever