Reviews for Night over the Chasm
ThomE.Gemcity-06 chapter 1 . 7/23/2016
Yay, Tris seeking out more Eric. I'm not upset for her going to Eric for Four not giving her some, why the hell wouldn't he hit that? Zeke catching them on camera makes for an exciting twist, I hope to read more in this!
HistoryISculture chapter 1 . 4/7/2015
Sequel soon, please!
BiaaPoletto chapter 1 . 3/25/2015
You need to write more fanfictions like this one! I love it!
dvgt chapter 1 . 3/22/2015
You should definitely make another part to this! I wanna know if Zeke ends up telling Four...
Guest chapter 1 . 3/9/2015
I wonder if zeke is gonna try to get tris too lol
catch39 chapter 1 . 3/7/2015
Eric and Tris should just tell Four together before Zeke beats them to it.
Acherlyn chapter 1 . 3/7/2015
I love your version(s) of Divergent. I have reading your stories and wanted to let you know. Here is an idea for one of the following series...have them meet in the middle. In the first one he went to her and in the second she went to him. That may not of been there intention, but that is what happened.
Maya6996 chapter 1 . 3/7/2015
TELL FOUR!
whispered angels chapter 1 . 3/7/2015
Love it! I really love all your stories and just can't wait for a new update from you. Impatiently waiting as always (:
Guest chapter 1 . 3/7/2015
Wow that was awesome lol good job... Also looking forward to the next update on daddy eric:)..."L"
Guest chapter 1 . 3/6/2015
Please, please, please turn this into an actual story! I read all of your Eric/Tris stories and I love them all equally, but I think if you turned this one shot into a story it would be the best one yet. (Well that depends on how Daddy Eric continues! He he) Seriously this would be a great idea for a new story! How lust between two opposites turns into love. Please!
rockin1323 chapter 1 . 3/6/2015
I hope that Zeke says something to Four. How many times can she be with Eric before he realizes that she doesn't love him anymore? I can't wait for the next story.
mrsbishop21 chapter 1 . 3/6/2015
Oh I think Zeke should tottaly hint to Four about his now unfaithful girlfriend! I would so want to see what else could come from this seeing that they now have a witness to their encounter! Will you continue this story or write another one time?
Sifuri Makosa chapter 1 . 3/6/2015
I love Tris I just wish that Eric would see that they would be good together and tell her to leave Four for him. I read a story today that has left me so anti Four I'm tempted to write a one shot about his demise...