Update soon?

Prefer the other version of the story before this one. It's a lot better.

Update

Please update

Pathetic and disappointing. Like thousands of previous "authors" before who have gotten bored, good riddance.

I feel the same way. It takes a seriously well written Naruto story to get me into it. I always hated how the story never picked a theme. It can't be goofy Naruto one second and deeply morbid themes the next.

It's Syndrome not Sinestro from the Incredible.

Are you going to let someone adopt this story

I've matured, yet still enjoy Naruto. But, opinions and all that. I think often times people expected too much from the series. We have to remember it's aimed at 15 year olds, yes we still read it as we age, obviously. Yet, that doesn't change the fact. Even after all this time, Oda keeps One Piece childish, even though he's a very good story teller.

Though it seems you have a personal gripe as to why, as you say they didn't develop how you thought they should. That's all opinion, again, lol.

Anyway, i personally still and will always love Naruto. It's a great series to me and will always hold a special place for me. Can understand other's not liking it. Good luck in the future, with your non-Naruto stories.

Update please!

i hope that you will update this soon :)

i hope its not abandoned...

I would enjoy a continuation of this version, particularly since this both gives what Danzo what he wants and thwarts many of his other goals as well *I enjoy watching Danzo getting what he wants in ways that are unexpected.* Naru will become more of a thorn in his side than he realizes at the moment, but then again that's half of the amusement.
Also stories where Naruto is Tobi's child are hard to find and I would like more please.

No offense but I liked The Second's son better than this story

Lets see how this turns out