Loved every chapter, thank you so much xx

Oh My God! I'm crying laughing here. Why have I never read this before? Sexy Severus! Actually I can see that! I love this!

Hi just read your story I love it.

I just started chapter 5 and saw your note about 4. Just wanted to let you know, you're not the only one that liked it. Ron is a jerk who I never liked, because fair weather friends are unlikeable and no friends at all. And that spell takes the expression about getting to know someone by walking a mile in their shoes to a whole new level. She wasn't going to listen to Harry any other way because she always knows best, and is 'always right'. I thought 4 was a cracking good chapter. Now that I've said my piece, I'm off to 5. I should be doing chores, but this is worlds more enjoyable! :D

I LOATHE Ron and Hermione Death to them both! Lol

XD! Good going Draco~~ Albus had to have something to done to him for all his 'mistakes'

LOVE IT!

LOVE

So, why hadn't Harry just talked to the twins instead of pushing them farther away by sending them to Azkaban? That made little sense, since the Twins were the closest of the Weaselys to Harry and they even felt close enough to him to make a contract. Also, you cannot argue that they agreed or whatever with their mother, since they left the Burrow because she wanted them to conform to her ideas for them. As they no longer live with their mother, they have no say in her decisions either, so Harry was being a dick to them for absolutely no explained reason! What's up with that?

I'm glad you were able to salvage Hermoine! The way you've written her, she will make an awesome "older" sister for Harry and Draco! XD

I prefer happy endings myself, so I am glad this one is. Although sometimes you mean to write one thing and out comes another.

I loved it.

Interesting. I wonder what effect the combined spells will have.

Are you aware you had Charlie say his mom killed Harry? In England it would be his mum. Also did you mean to call Mr Weasley the paterfamilias? To me that word should be patriarch. I realize this work was translated so I wasn't sure that's what you meant. I have written in American English in this fandom and another, but I have beta'd for someone from England a long time. I'm not sure everyone else would have picked up on those.

I can see why she would do it.
Lovely speech.
How will Harry get out of that one?

It's always hard to get idioms across from one language or even just a different dialect to another.

That was pretty evil. I'm glad Ron finally saw the light.