I'm not the best judge of this, but I think you're writing is good. It's nice to come across good writing. Allow me to leave another review. It does seem as if she, Katie, has an anger management issue. Tough life too. Dead mother. Perhaps a dead father coming in her future. A doctor? I do find that interesting, good interesting. The episode where Oliver gets shot may bring her in to play. It's nice to know she lost her weight and will no longer go by Twinkie. I look forward to reading more.

I'm 100% obsessed with this story already

I-I can't believe you went there. I mean I have read a lot, and I mean A LOT, of Arrow fanfics but I have yet to read one with bats in it. Good lord, I liked this story before but now I'm in love.

Great chapter.

Good chapter

Great chapter

Great chapter.

Good beginning.

WOOOOOO! GO BATMAN!

Hey I absolutely love u..
Your story is amazing. Every chapter ended with a suspense. You are an amazing writer. Keep writing Oliver/oc stories..All the best :)

That ending...just no words.

Heyy your story is great! You are an amazing writer! Love Twinkie , Ollie and Bruce ! It's amazing to see Bruce in starling city! You are doing great! Keep it up!

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i think this is a great start to a story and i shall continue reading until proven otherwise (hopefully such a thing does not happen). however, i have noticed a couple of small - but extremely annoying problems. mainly that she had interchangeable him/hers/he/she/

Aww, drunk Twinkie!

I love the little Tommy/Katie friendship moments, they're so funny! I hope there is more of them soon.

Poor Oliver, out of the loop and pissed off. I hope they get Katie back soon, he better kiss the crap out of her!