Hello here, I just wanted to say that, even though this is an incomplete story that barely began, I do enjoy it for what it is. It's good speculation and, while its sad we're never going to know how it would have turned out completed, still a nice and creepy one-shot.

I've read the other reviews and I can't say anything new, but I wanted to leave my own anyways cause this is just so good. And I'm really sad it's probably never going to be continued. Oh well, still enjoyed it and helps me write Wander in my own fanfiction, so thanks!

I'm gonna be honest, no one really felt OOC in this? Yeah, Wander got disheartened at some points but it was still in character because he didn't completely give up hope. That's a central part of who he is. As for Janet, she was definitely in character, just as intimidating and creepy as I remember her to be from her episode. I know it;'s been a whole year since you posted this, but I am quite curious to see where you would've gone with this story. if you ever continue it, I'd like to see that.

This is so just... wow. Words fail me. I think you've got Wander's personality perfect. He's too sweet to hate. I'm really hoping you continue this. It's just so... just so... wow.

I am interested in seeing more of this even though it has not been updated in such a long time.

I don't think you need to worry much about being too occ with these two. This is the most believable Wander in a dark situation i've seen so far (and I love that the darkness isn't overdone), while adding a maturity to his thought process while keeping his personality. You can really feel his loneliness, homesickness, exhaustion, and almost desperation that Sylvia will come back; it's all conveyed really well.
It even seems to be cannon in the show that Wander keeps up a friendly, optimistic attitude even when scared or panicking.

Absolutely wonderfully written. It's dark without seeming over-done, which I've never seen portrayed to such wonders. It's enthralling how you've captured the personalities of both the planet and Wander. I am highly curious how the other characters would react to Wander's grim predicament, and seeing as you originally planned this to be a Wander/Hater work, it would certainly be interesting to see how the story unfolds
It would be a treasure to see more, but even just this one chapter is value enough. I am truly amazed at the beautiful work you have created. Kudos to you.

MORE! THIS STORY HAS SO MUCH GOING FOR IT AND A LOT OF POTENTIAL!

I, for one, absolutely love this. I'd need to watch the episode, but I think I know what's ailing Wander.

He's a Nomad, and craves travel, and freedom. Keeping him locked up is essentially stealing his energy and slowly killing him. Keep it up and Happy Story Weaving!

Liliana Dragonshard

I like how you portray the characters and the overall smoothness of the story. They feel real and it's nicely paced so it doesn't feel rushed or tacky. I haven't seen a fiction like this in the longest time, so it's nice to find one again.

I have to tell you, this story is amazing so far!

I know it's a dark and difficult subject, but you really nailed Janet's obsessive personality and Wander's reaction to captivity.

Please, tell me I can expect an update soon? You have something really good going here!

Howw did I miss this on my last visit here? Being a fan of AU-fics and all this is kinda embarassing. :O
But now that it's caught my attention, I'll rectify this immediately! To Yonder we Wander! 8D

So where things were left off in "the Lonely Planet", how things could've been taken on a darker spin. W/ Sylvia not around, Janet's gone even more off the handle and now Wander's ensnared in her leafy clutches.
She's the epitome of a yandere in cartoons today. It's both awesome and creepy! :'3

It was pretty interesting to see how the contrast from Janet to being so accommodating to Wander then become so overly controlling in a flash. Guess that's the manipulative side showing. 8/
He rlly is just too kind for his own good! It might be considered Stockholm Syndrome but this IS Wander we're talking about. Poor hatless star nomad... :(
If it was only a one-shot then there'd be no resolve, luckily that is not the case. Sylvia was trapped but she's still alive so all she needs is some back-up, and who could serve better than a long-time nemesis?

This is a pretty good idea for a story, even though it's been a while since it's last update I hope it may still continue. For now, take care! Hope to see you again! :3

This story is rather interesting, it makes me sad of course- but still good.
I hope you continue this story, it's had a wonderful start! c:

Very nice! I really like this so far, please continue.

Oh man even if there's only one chapter this is really good so far! It's a really interesting situation, putting Wander in captivity against his nature without Sylvia for so long. Plus it's just really well written in general.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Very well written! I can't wait to read more!