Reviews for Losing Control |
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Fernanda chapter 1 . 2/10/2018 I wanted to say that your story was amazing! I’ve always wanted to read a story in which Kushina would lose control. The characters were on point! They weren’t OC at all. I like how you didn’t make Kushina a damsel in distress, even if she was weak after the whole ordeal. There weren’t any loose ends either. And I didn’t feel that you rushed at any point. Congratulations on a story well made |
Welt Ende chapter 1 . 5/24/2017 Wonderful~! Nice idea on Rasengan's creation, if only there was such a scene in the anime or manga! |
ByeByeBriar chapter 1 . 10/11/2016 This is great. Kudos to you. |
brendatorres113 chapter 1 . 10/8/2016 That was beautiful! Awesome story xD |
A Whimsical Seishin chapter 1 . 3/4/2016 Very well done and that ending, just beautiful. |
anigasm chapter 1 . 1/6/2016 This is absolutely amazing! I love it, thank you for writing this fic :) |
His Rose bud 125 chapter 1 . 7/29/2015 That was brilliant how has this not got more reviews, I often wondered if kashina lost control she human after all and we all make mistakes right? |
shira chapter 1 . 3/25/2015 oh my sweet goodness I LOVE THIS STORY! THE ENDING AND THE MINAKUSHI AND EVERYTHING LIKE OH MY GOD!1! I LOVE IT! |
Alley McNally chapter 1 . 3/15/2015 The ending isn't bad. It's actually fairly good. I would actually be more concerned with the middle of the story where you have that transformation. It's minor, but I don't think they would be doing a lot of exposition there. They are fighting the ninetails! That is scary inside Naruto let alone inside her. They couldn't lose focus like that and expect to live. Beyond that it was pretty good! |
neko-chan chapter 1 . 3/10/2015 I love the ending. So sweet! |