| Reviews for Out of the Blue |
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  caitlyn breen chapter 6 . 11/12/2017 I think that it was a good story although personally their should be a chapter 6 where Sawyer becomes Clay’s legal son and Sawyer’s father almost dies tell me what you think |
 Skylark4004 chapter 6 . 5/10/2016 Please add more! |
| LoveShipper chapter 6 . 4/14/2016 At least the police will do what they can to protect Sawyer |
| Jacey Mall chapter 4 . 11/1/2015 Cozi is the actor of Hazel! that is really cool:) |
| HBofPoseidon'nGryffindorSeeker chapter 5 . 7/29/2015 This is a great story. I cant wait to learn of the if they find Mark. |
| leafninja667 chapter 1 . 4/15/2015 You keep switching between 1st person and 3rd person. You would write " hazel and I" from sawyer's point of view, then write " they", and occasionally you would write in hazel point of view. You shouldn't do this because it gets a little confusing and makes Sawyer seem like a jerk on occasion when you switch from lawyers point of view to hazel thoughts back to Sawyer. You might want to try working on keeping it with only one p.o.v. k? Good story though! |
| magturtle chapter 5 . 4/14/2015 That was good. I just started. I really like it and cant wait for more so can you please update soon! Thanks and keep up the great work! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/9/2015 When are you gonna update it's killing me plz don't leave it hanging |
| Ghost adventure lover23 chapter 5 . 4/7/2015 Wow awesome chapter update soon |
| LoveShipper chapter 5 . 4/7/2015 Hmm can't find the jerk but don't want Sawyer to worry as he heals |
| LoveShipper chapter 4 . 3/29/2015 Thank God Hazel heard Hope and Winter's call for help |
| Ghost adventure lover23 chapter 4 . 3/29/2015 wow awesome chapter |
| Ghost adventure lover23 chapter 3 . 3/28/2015 Wow please update please I can't wait to read the next chapter |
| Tomasa chapter 3 . 3/28/2015 PLEASE MAKE MORE i want to see what happen NEXT Please! What happen to sawyer |
| LoveShipper chapter 3 . 3/23/2015 Ok scary moment indeed. I hope someone saves Sawyer soon. |
