Reviews for The Forbidden World
SparrowJones96 chapter 2 . 5/6
I love this. I hope you continue it.
axel100 chapter 2 . 6/20/2019
This has great potential. I'm sorry to see it abandoned.
Rakkis3059 chapter 2 . 11/29/2018
Just found this and I love it. I hope you pick it up again.
ms.meow1968 chapter 2 . 9/14/2018
Oh fudge the suspense is killing me.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/13/2018
Nice story, I can see a good bit of potential with this, though I can't see it being easy to write. Good work. Good Person Test.
Pikanet128 chapter 2 . 12/30/2017
Very good
Sad it’s on hiatus
An'yaSobola chapter 2 . 3/14/2017
it would be really great if you could continue the story..
DragoonSensei chapter 2 . 3/11/2017
This is realy awsome!
Please continu!
samuelalpha86 chapter 2 . 9/5/2016
i like this story please continue
Lucifer Daemon chapter 2 . 8/11/2016
too bad I really liked this one.
Archer1eye chapter 2 . 11/28/2015
This story is pretty awesome. I like how it's going just wondering, and hoping. Will it continue?
Puidwen chapter 2 . 10/27/2015
Great and well written fic.
Tsamoka chapter 2 . 9/30/2015
This, I like. A lot. Pretty much what I'd expect from a RWBY/Stargate crossover, but perfect for this. I can't wait to see how this goes. So many possibilities! Keep up the good work! :)
Dracomarine chapter 2 . 9/10/2015
This is excellent and needs more! you have done a great job with the characters and how they act. I can easily see Oneil responding the way he does. Please make more if you have the opportunity!
The Zombineer chapter 2 . 9/7/2015
I have to be honest: I was skeptical when I saw this at first. But... It works. Surprisingly well, in fact.
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