Great story!

Chapter 3 review:
Love how you portray this chapter from Grid’s perspective! It’s very interesting and creative!:):)

Chapter 2 review:
I love that Lex takes comfort in holding Scar’s Spear!
I get the feeling that Dubois is up to something sinister and I love how she called the shots and told him to “Get the fuck off my lawn”!
That was brilliant:):)
I love this story and regret not getting to it sooner:):)

Poor Scar. That actually made me feel as sad as he did. This is incredibly well written and very interesting:)
Makes the reader actually feel what the main character is feeling.
I don’t trust the female Healer. She seems like the type to experiment on her patients. But maybe that’s just me.
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Sweet! Been waiting ages for this news

I'M ALL OVER IT!

This is a really good story and written very well. I enjoyed reading the whole story and I look forward to the sequel. I really liked the interaction between Scar and Lex. Thank you for posting this wonderful story.

Aweeee can we get a steamy epilogue

Ok that last comment was the shiz nit. I’m glad I didn’t disregard this book

Just found your story and power read through it. I absolutely loved it and can't wait for the next installment!

An end of an ERA! Wow ;_; like...this chapter got me from beginning to end! Goshhhh. First of all, that moment where they see each other, running towards one another despite the chaos is like the perfect movie moment. I legit could SEEEEEE this happening! Scar just holding her tight while also cutting the arm off an alien queen XD too real! Best power couple everr
Also i will neeeeeveer be over scar worrying for lex. Like I love that Lex sees scar injured and in chains but it's SCAR whose far more worried about Lex. Lol I love that she's the death of him but one he'd gladly accept. Also whoa O_O about Lucas calling lex an 'alien fucker.' My eyes went wide there-the dude's not wrong but damn. Also GREAT way to bring back AVP into the equation with Scar doing that hand gesture from the movie! Loved the callback. Also yessss! i love how difficult it was for lex to choose to go to him ;_; it's so real. But there were good points to go, especially all the knowledge she had plus not being guaranteed safety on earth due to being a potential 'traitor.' I love how you wrote these soldiers too. Something about them always felt authentically 'Predator.'
Not just the dialogue but the fact that some come out of it understanding that those they work for aren't so 'clean' while also gaining an appreciation for Lex's skills. ALKDJFAJKL I LOVEEE THE ENDING ;-;
Very positive but leaves it open enough for more. Lex and Scar are together (scuse my fangirl heart for BURSTING). It's the ending that, let's be honest, we all wanted. Lex going into space with her epic Yautja BF. There's gonna be problems for sure, culture shock n' the like (to say the least). But they will have each other. So excited for the next installment :) you always have a fan in me! 33 I think it's a good idea to have the fic at least partially completed before uploading it. Just to give you some breathing room in the long run. Either way, will always tag/message you if I make more art. I may jump from fandom to fandom but I alwayssss circle back :) plus Scar/lex was like...my main OTP since childhood. The main reason I love alien/human relationships. Thank YOU for being one of the few writers to capture the relationship between these two so genuinely. Best of luck in your writing 3333 and thank you as always for taking the time to MAKE this story!

Congratulations my dear! This was engaging and exciting with witty writing!

Now, I have to be honest. I feel Scar was cheated. I feel like Lex only went with him because "humans", were going to use and chase her. She wasn't even going to say goodbye to him. Only when Ricky told her to "go", did she make up her mind. Scar was consistent in his complete devotion and love to her. She cares for him but not enough to leave with him. It took to be shot at and told to go with Scar. I kind of want him to be hurt and not so forgiving to her. She pissed me off. He deserves better than being chosen for protection or second best.

Anyway good luck! Hopefully this will be addressed somehow or at least clear this up or have her prove her love for Scar.

Im so glad your continuing this

You did an amazing job!

And so we have come to the end of this FANTASTIC tale! And I LOVED all of it! It was so great! Thank you, thank you, thank you! I loved it so much!

That final battle, tho', SON! Oh, man! My pulse was actually racing! I had to take periodic breaks because this was getting to me!

The ending was so perfect, too! Lex seeing that, sometimes, humans can be dicks! Now, Scar and Lex can get down to business. And, by "business", I mean Lex finally gonna get that DIC...chance to explore the stars with the Predator she loves.

But WAIT! "The End... The Beginning..." "The Enemy's Heart: UNKNOWN TERRITORIES"? And you tease me about MY cliffhangers?! I cannot WAIT for what you do next with this! You're so great! This has been a fantastic ride and I cannot wait to go back and read it again!

You kick all of the ass, Ryoko. Don't you ever forget how awesome you are!