thomas is weak...come on make him grown a spine...
since the first chapter you writer's block, after one chapter...come on

I love the song and one day Hakeem will get punch in the face by Thomas

you need to keep this story going before you lose fans.

It was good

I think Thomas should do he own music

What I dont get is that you update other stories but dont update your empire story like come on it been like 2 months -_- Are you Abandoning it

I understand hes 16 but what does he look like you never said what he wears or what he looks like hes like blank

Thomas finally showed his dad he could sing and write music and do it all his will what else Thomas can do to make his dad happy

I love the song and I like Cookie and how he final meet he mom

update please

write more of this its really great

I love it! The adding on to the family, the conversation with jamal_ I can't wait to see lucif- lucious interaction with Thomas, and how cookie will react, he probably doesn't remember her though...oh and I loved how you stayed true to Lucious' personality, he is a rat ba$tard who would step on his kid dreams and dismiss him- can't wait till the update!

will Thomas ever get a singing contract from his dad or will it take his brother's help for him to get one and his dad to see he really loves to sing and sing for the fans that he will have one day

You did an excellent job setting up the beginning of your story! I'm looking forward to Thomas Lyon and his journey in his music career. I wonder what he would look like? Anyway Good job! Can't wait until the next chapter.

I feel bad for thomas he should get to do music to like his brother