Reviews for Initiate |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Daaaaaaaaaaamn was not expecting that so basically dipper will become bill and go back in time to make sure dipper becomes bill again like a time loop. and the last part was: YOU DON'T HAVE A CHOICE WILLIAM |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is really awesome. I can tell that you planned it out well, and I LOVE the idea of dark Dipper, haha. Nice work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dipper is actually Bill, or... his incarnation in the physical world? Something like that is really frightening. But boy, it would be so darn exciting to see. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Woooaahhh. *looks at reviews for answers* Man I don't get this. It was so ambiguous...so jarring, frustratingly confusing! But that was the point for this fic, I think. To create the sense of confusion that Dipper was feeling. I kinda like the idea how Dipper is slowly falling into insanity and obsession with the journals to the point where Bill can manipulate him. That means...evil Dipper. *dun dun dUUUNNNnn* Haha, all jokes aside, this was very well written! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is the most absorbed I've been while reading something in a while. I don't read much, but still. The italics was the dream, right? It was woven in amazingly. This whole thing was written amazingly, I think. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "You don't have a choice" ... ... ... WILLIAM. ...Well, that IS an ambitious theory - one that you tackled quite nicely. It started out with a simple "twin-comforts-twin" plot and evolved into much more. Thanks very much for writing this, I greatly enjoyed it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is in depth. Glad I took the time to read it all. |