Not enough. Cut the story too short.

Wow. Such a gentle piece of writing. I love how you wrote both of them, so very them and you manager to bring the sweetness, the fun, the trepidation, the realisation, everything so well. This really made me smile. Love the way you did it! Thank you. :) Favoriting and following you and this beautiful piece right this instance! :)

Just found this, and oh-how-we-all-fell-for-it... Love Maura's reaction, how you wrote her, so very much in character. Nice!

Oh I loved this one! It's so them. I love how Jane comes to the realization that she's the person. And Maura is even sweeter than ever drinking a beer in the middle of the night so Jane isn't drinking alone. How sweet and considerate is that? I would love to maybe see a sequel to this one. Thanks for entertaining us!

This is wonderful. It's just so gentle and sweet. It's not contrived, it eases us in and Jane and Maura are so in tune with each other.

You've really brought them alive with your words and made it feel believable. Maura not wanting Jane to drink alone, despite the fact it's beer, and the middle of the night, only strengthens the depth of their relationship. The fact she knew it was Jane in the first place.

And Jane, lying awake trying to delve deeper into her own revelations until she reached that point. I can certainly picture her running out in the middle of the night desperate to tell Maura. In the world of modern technology so many people might pick up the phone and tweet or text, or ring if it's more serious, but I've never seen Jane as much of a texter, which is why her doing what she did makes perfect sense.

Thank you for writing this, it really made me smile.

This was a nice story, and well paced. They both sounded just like themselves.

However, concerning the last line: unless Jane came over wearing high heels, (which she probably wouldn't dressed as she was), Maura would have to bend or crouch for Jane's chin to reach the top of her head. Check it out. In sneakers or bare feet, there's not that much difference in their heights.

Great little Story, but just to short I would have loved for it to have gone on a bit longer, it was good.

Great job! This is just what I was hoping for! :-)

How sweet. How much I wish. Thanks 4 making a wish come true even if it only in print. A BOSTONIAN FAN.

great story, so glad this was shared on facebook

I really like this - very true to the characters.

This is so perfect!

finally the bell rings lol

good story

Well done! I really enjoyed your lovely and delightful story. Thanks :)