Excellent story

Great story! I'm just now starting to read Toothcup! :)

This is a good story can't wait for more

Hicup is now elite powerfull Alfa has a hord of Night Furies . With his knolige to aim in the wings potentually a Rain of plazma blast would envelop the RedSeath . If she is flying and from two to more than 5500 others join up in the sky The Red Death's wings should be a swiss cheese in no time , And maybe the final shots fill The Qeen in her falling shoot cook her and explode faster in huge inferno in the air provably . Anyway what happends next ?

Please update .

Well it went well . Astrid got Hicup who befour flew away to save his best forbiden unusuyal friend's life and renamed and
truly Night (Mighty) Heal"

ch 6

Hicup that was dreaming in You , your endless prowess,boldness,dedication to help and compassion , allmost endless . Strong as Merlin .

Come on really a cliff hanger?

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ch 4

Well Hicup is natural fast learner genious . And well that shows the
power that Hicup got . By the way The heman's mind/magic protects the dragons and also even the energy scend , heat is enought to protect that dragon mind .

Is that Greatron Lake Poisonous Electric Conductive Iron ?! Or just Night fury battle medic healer .

Ch 1

For the first thought Stoic , Hic just wanted to befriend with someone after realising tht he saw the innocence and the fear of that poor creature tht was trapped . That is not magic act in that . Hicup could endure bigger heavy weights when he is pinned fom obout 90 kilo's a a tone or tone and half , just saying equivalent of flying bear . Something heavy than Nadder

And Hicup got a bit of that streight , and he potentually could be sorcerour as mighty as Merlin stronger than the Red Death if he unleash it .

Stoic grats , now is Hicup still a traitor hen You found the truth . A true traitor is a person who betrays everything or his country ok , but if he doesn't do damage that person at least is not a enemy , just a reason to do it .

Good but I feel the progression was too fast also it's kind of hard to read but keep up good work

Nice chapter! A few errors here and there, but nice job.

Where is the story lol... jk, can't wait for chaptet five!

You tell them Greath!

Wow, this story is coming along nicely, just a few notes it is Chief, not chef, and if you could, make yelling and talking more distinguishable? You use caps alot... awesome job, keep it up!

A little short but i like it...please update soon