noooooo it was so goood why did you leave it like that saaaaaaad i want more even thou its been 3 years

Such a cute and funny story! Shame it’s unfinished, though. You made me laugh so many times whilst reading this. Their dialogue is absolutely hilarious. I definitely won’t be forgetting some of these jokes, aha XD I can definitely imagine them saying those things. You’ve really characterised Onodera and Takano both quite well! I really enjoyed this. :)

Dear Author,
Your story was a fantastic read. I am really enjoying the content and the ramp up to both of the characters being able to read each other's thoughts was timed quiet well. I even laughed a little bit at the very end. You do have a couple of minor errors, mostly they appear to be mis-clicks on the keyboard. For example, you have a "Tanakosan" instead of "Tanako-san" near the end of this final chapter. Anyways, I hope you are planning to continue this. Happy writing.
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What a fun story i hope more is added to it one day

I've notice that all your sekaiichi hatsukoi stories are all incomplete...

Whats going to happen now that they can both read each others thoughts is the story going to continue?

Update please!

I burst out laugh so hard! XDDDDD

It's been a while i read absolutely hilarious awesome fic! I LOVE IT TOO MUCH!

The first best thing in this fic is when Takano-san read Ritsu's thought for the first time in very hot sweet lovely moment.

The second best thing is when Takano tease Yokozawa and/in front of Kirishima-san! The found out about jealous thing was fun and refreshing.

The third best thing definitely the end of this chapter.

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE!

YOUR SEKAIICHI HATSUKOI FIC IS REALLY AWESOME SO FAR!

Very interesting so far. Please, do continue.

This is so fun to read! I like the way you portray them. Their actions are totally the same. It's like I'm reading another chapter of manga! Thank you for the good read!

Oh my god this story is so cute and you hzbe me so hooked, I'll be expecting an update.

This is a really great story

I love this concept. So much XD I love how you portray the dynamics of their relationship, and your portrayal of Onodera is spot on XD you've gotten off to a fantastic start! Please update soon!

This is amazing! Update! Love this story!

This is the third time I've read this fic. It's hilarious, especially the part where Onodera nearly slams his head into the desk when Takano won't stop thinking "I love you". And the premise is great too, and although you haven't updated in some time, it's really fun to think about how things will go now that they can read each other's minds, like Takano thinking ridiculous and random thoughts towards Onodera at work just to see if he can make him laugh. Great job c: