Love it. Hope Hans dies of explosive diarrhea. Please continue when you can, and stay safe.

Yay! Glad to see you still here! Can’t wait to see what happens!

And I will be here for the next chapters, no matter the wait . :) I'm glad that you're continuting the story. I enjoyed what you'd written and am SO EXCITED to see where you take this! D Good luck with writing, but make sure to take care of yourself. :) Until chapter 12! (I am super excited. Like. Excited, but with a cape.)

Would love to see more!

Why do you keep delaying anx abandoning! Please come back! Especially with the newest movie to add more content

Looking good so far.

I have read the first version of the story and I realy liked it liked it but (careful SPOILER ALERT) I wouldn't use the trolls as an answer to everything. the poison was understandable but using them to heal hiccup instantly was a bit to much you could have made hiccups healing process a bit longer and ceep the communication problem up a bit . that's the only thing I had to criticize. hope you update soon

Wow this is totally awesome! Please update soon! :)

An interesting story. And nice to see one where Astrid isn't killed off or having Hiccup be paired up with Elsa. Though, certainly a darker tone than most other stories. I'll be keeping an eye on it.

Man, I hate that brown-haired man...
Good chapter as always! Oh, and what was the name of the Race To The Edge episode you mentioned?

This story is much better than the original, I must say. Also, I was wondering if you are going to update soon. it is very well written, and I would hate to see this story abandoned.

i was just wondering when do u usualy post new updates because i dont like to keep checking for updates when theres really nothing to check i really enjoy so far but i wish that hiccup would be more afraid of elsa and anna and would try to escape. and i hope that there is actualy going to be a start of a war some people will get killed but everything will unfold you should make HicElsa

That blonde guy's gotta die. How dare he mistreat Anna and expect to get away with it!?

Oh boy things are about to get messy I just hope everything works out in the end before something happens

This is definitely an improvement! I'm happy you're able to rewrite it. :)